Just Give Them a Rose

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May be an image of heart and flower

One single teardrop for all of mankind 
empathetic emotions that flow like the sea 
attached to each other we have been vined 
only together can we set ourselves free
a tear for the world and a tear for the babes 
hasten your feet towards paving a path  
it is health and well being, that everyone craves
let us share every blessing to lessen the wrath 
a globule of water on a baby cheek lost 
they are our future lets cradle them soft  
do what we can, without counting the cost
lets raise them with love then keep them aloft. 
One single droplet and splatter it goes,  
don't make them cry, just give them a rose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/18/2023 11:16:00 PM
Captivating and gorgeous sonnet. Your emotions are delicate and charming. Hugs.
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Date: 6/19/2023 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Victor for your kind comment, Blessings from the heart
Date: 6/18/2023 10:00:00 AM
Lovely sonnet, Vie. It's so important that we teach our young, by example, to love other and treat them as we want them to treat us. It's trite, but what the world needs now is Love sweet Love! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 6/19/2023 12:26:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by my poems Bill, God bless you
Date: 6/18/2023 8:00:00 AM
Magnificent! Superb word choice, flow, combined phrasing & advice, yes, too, for mention of biblical ref of weeping for babes in —our later-day times. (Think about editing lets to let’s ? This should be recited to All on all the news programs! Surely this was divinely inspired! Hugs and His blessings…. sally
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Date: 6/19/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thank yu for reading Sally, blessings
Date: 6/18/2023 4:19:00 AM
Hi Mystic, this is a great free verse with a great message. I love your line: "do what we can, without counting the cost". Yes! Lovely work. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 6/19/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for reading Gary, God bless
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