Just Friends

Lately, I have not been in touch
Though, I like talking to you - much.
The reason, which I'll share with you
Is embarrassing, but true.

I have a brain and two good eyes.
So, I mainly see, and I'm mainly wise,
But a small part of me is not so smart.
I'd like to think it is my heart.

One thing I can clearly see - 
Your old enough, to my daughter be.
You have beauty that is very rare,
While I'm old, skinny and have no hair.

Worse yet - my limitations are many.
Things I do, places I go - hardly any.
All this is fine - 'cuz we're just friends, 
But this is not quite where this poem ends.

When I see you in a pretty dress,
The brain inside my head works less.
All the things above which I should know
Turn inside my brain to dough.

I don't want you to see a silly fight
Between dumb Dave wrong, and smart Dave right.
I don't think it would be very cool
To make you put up with such a fool.

Well, anyway, forget what I said
About my eyes, and about my head.
Excuse me if my behavior weirdly tends,
And you and I can just be friends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Christian Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 12:50 PM
a well writren poem honest is good
Crandall Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 11:54 AM
You are right Diane. This is a very honest poem, and many of my other ones are made up, or a combination of real and made up. Being honest in a poem is a challenge for me.
M  Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 12:26 AM
David….your poem flows beautifully, is touching and sweet, honest and humorous! It touched my heart and made me smile! Loved it….Debx
Crandall Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Aw, glad you liked it Deb!
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