Just For Your Mind's Thoughts

Summers day
a picture of a thatched house with all it's glow
arch way's filled with mother natures bloom's

rose's that trail for as far as the eyes can see

red's,yellow's,pink's,White's,purple's,

fresh cut grass so sweet to the summer's smells

a plane humming so ever peaceful,

blue bell's and daffodils that dance to the soft wind's blow
wheat field's so golden to the look
flowers with such grace that stand there place

see summer's so beautiful for my love to see

my kaftan lady ..                the nightwalker  24Th October 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/30/2010 12:45:00 PM
Aaahhh. That's sweet. I like the imagery in this piece.
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Date: 10/29/2010 8:38:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup and I have enjoyed reading your work!
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Date: 10/29/2010 7:35:00 AM
Duncan, you have painted a wonderful portrait of a peaceful little house surrounded by nature's beauty. You make the reader want to visit this place! I love the imagery and the free verse style you chose to convey your message. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/29/2010 7:02:00 AM
This sets such a pretty picture in my mind! Love it!
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Date: 10/29/2010 5:24:00 AM
Enjoyed this one ...Very expressive and descriptive with such passion..I am glad that I chose it to read this A.M. I was delighted that you chose to read so many of my works...I hope that there was something there that you really enjoyed..I enjoyed trying to write them..Sara
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