Just for the Lonely

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Written 30th March 2025
Write Nine Beautiful Lines (With a Twist ) Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 

Beautiful are folk with hearts of gold Unsightly are those with hearts stone cold Take some time to learn of someone's worth You may get major surprise of earth Women don’t need to be dressed in lace A man doesn’t need a handsome face Just to be a compassionate soul A person who fits the friendship role Would you befriend me, an aging droll?

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Date: 5/8/2025 12:55:00 AM
Dear Beryl, your poem does not beat round the bush; you say what you candidly mean, and the end twist deserves a round of applause ~ friendship is definitely not measured by looks or age! ~ Best regards // paul
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/8/2025 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Paul, you are so right, friendship is built on understanding, compassion and caring. All the best, Beryl
Date: 4/9/2025 9:05:00 AM
Beryl, OMG what a funny ending! And yes, I think most of us would! I think you've hit the nail on the head. All goodness and beautiful. Smiles!!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/8/2025 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Duke, faraway friend.keep smiling… Beryl
Date: 4/9/2025 6:51:00 AM
Nuff said, and nicely written Beryl Congratulations! :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/8/2025 11:21:00 AM
Thank you Linda, truly grateful… Beryl
Date: 4/7/2025 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your powerful write. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/8/2025 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Paula. Blessings to you too… Beryl
Date: 4/7/2025 11:40:00 AM
- So true, Beryl :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/8/2025 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, appreciated… Beryl
Date: 4/7/2025 8:03:00 AM
Your poem evokes a distinct sense of beauty, nuanced feelings, and fantastic imagery, dear Beryl. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
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Date: 4/7/2025 1:41:00 AM
Congrats on your placement Beryl. Well said.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/7/2025 1:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Oliver, I’m pleased with the placement… Beryl
Date: 4/3/2025 11:03:00 AM
I love your message in this one Dear Beryl another favorite... Hugs...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/7/2025 1:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael, I’m truly grateful… Beryl
Date: 4/3/2025 12:57:00 AM
Dear Beryl, So much wisdom in your beautiful words woven here in such a soulfully meaningful manner! I agree with your opening lines especially and i have a special place in my heart for those that are kind and have a beautiful heart and one that selflessly gives! I also agree with “ Women don’t need to be dressed in lace A man doesn’t need a handsome face Just to be a compassionate soul ” so true! And profound! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/7/2025 1:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink, your encouragement means a lot… Beryl
Date: 4/2/2025 7:41:00 AM
Hi sister Beryl I'll always be your friend, from the days of FFP now on poetry Soup, hope Alan is feeling better.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/2/2025 8:01:00 AM
Brother John, you’ll always be my friend too, it was eleven years ago that we met. You, Magicman and me, us three with our Limericks we had such fun, especially on the run up to Christmas each December, I’ll always remember… Sis Beryl ( Alan is not good. )
Date: 4/1/2025 8:27:00 AM
Your worth is golden, Beryl poetess never be lonely keep busy with poetry~ xhugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/1/2025 3:15:00 PM
Thank you Anaya. For everyone there’s a hand to hold, coming with a heart of gold. I’m never lonely, with a husband, close sisters and friends. Plus the PoetryLust… Hugs x Beryl
Date: 3/31/2025 9:19:00 AM
Hello Beryl, beautifully written, your words full of wisdom. Good luck in the contest. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/31/2025 9:27:00 AM
Thank you dear poet friend, I appreciate your good wishes. Have a wonderful week too… Beryl
Date: 3/30/2025 10:27:00 PM
Great advice, though I would change the title. See also my soup mail. Best of luck.
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Date: 3/31/2025 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Victor, have read your email and heeded your advice… Beryl
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