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Poetry/Than-Bauk/Variation/Just For Me
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Written, September 03, 2024
For the International contest, Than-Bauk Variation
Sponsor, Kim Rodrigues, Judged 09/17/2024

Second Place

Just For Me

 

Oh, the birds tweet
and their trills send
a twirp' for me

birdsoundthan-bauk

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/23/2024 12:03:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:13:00 PM

Beata, thank you for the compliment, congrats, and comment, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 12:09:00 PM

This is so sweet. Tweet tweet!! Congrats, dear heart.

Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:13:00 PM

Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats, your dear heart, Constance

Terry Flood

Date: 9/20/2024 3:15:00 PM

Enjoyed this Constance. I have all my feeders just outside my kitchen window… sometimes it sounds more like a rainforest! Congrats. Terry

Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2024 8:14:00 PM

Terry, thank you for the compliment, comment and congrats, I love listening to the birds ! Constance

Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2024 10:45:00 PM

So beautiful! Birdsongs ares so comforting always! Dear constance your take on the form is so melodious! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light always

Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2024 8:15:00 PM

Ink, thank you for the complimnt, lovely comment and congratulations, Constance

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/18/2024 9:32:00 AM

Terrific than-bauk. Can't count the times I have sat in my swing, listening to the birds imagining words they repeat over and over. Congratulations, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2024 8:15:00 PM

Reason, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, I love listening to the birds also, Constance

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/17/2024 10:02:00 PM

congratulations dear poet.

Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2024 4:59:00 AM

Thriveni, thank you so much for the congratulations, Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/17/2024 5:36:00 PM

Wasn’t sure about th apostrophe after twirp but enjoyed. Congratulations, Constance!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2024 5:34:00 AM

Gotcha! I took twirp more as a meeting of a silly or contemptible person. lol. Regardless, an enjoyable Than-Bauk :)

Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2024 5:01:00 AM

Kim, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations, I put the apostrophe after twirp because the real word is twirping but could not use that because of the syllable restriction, Constance

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/3/2024 8:46:00 PM

sweet sweet sweet. happy writing dear poet friend.

Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2024 11:31:00 AM

Thriveni, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, Constance

Just For Me

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