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Poetry/Than-Bauk/Variation/Just For Me
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Written, September 03, 2024
For the International contest, Than-Bauk Variation
Sponsor, Kim Rodrigues, Judged 09/17/2024

Second Place

Just For Me

 

Oh, the birds tweet
and their trills send
a twirp' for me

birdsoundthan-bauk

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Beata Agustin

September 23, 2024 at 12:03 AM

Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

Constance La France

September 24, 2024 at 12:13 PM

Beata, thank you for the compliment, congrats, and comment, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

September 22, 2024 at 12:09 PM

This is so sweet. Tweet tweet!! Congrats, dear heart.

Constance La France

September 24, 2024 at 12:13 PM

Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats, your dear heart, Constance

Terry Flood

September 20, 2024 at 3:15 PM

Enjoyed this Constance. I have all my feeders just outside my kitchen window… sometimes it sounds more like a rainforest! Congrats. Terry

Constance La France

September 21, 2024 at 8:14 PM

Terry, thank you for the compliment, comment and congrats, I love listening to the birds ! Constance

Ink Empress

September 19, 2024 at 10:45 PM

So beautiful! Birdsongs ares so comforting always! Dear constance your take on the form is so melodious! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light always

Constance La France

September 21, 2024 at 8:15 PM

Ink, thank you for the complimnt, lovely comment and congratulations, Constance

Reason A. Poteet

September 18, 2024 at 9:32 AM

Terrific than-bauk. Can't count the times I have sat in my swing, listening to the birds imagining words they repeat over and over. Congratulations, Constance.

Constance La France

September 21, 2024 at 8:15 PM

Reason, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, I love listening to the birds also, Constance

thriveni c mysore

September 17, 2024 at 10:02 PM

congratulations dear poet.

Constance La France

September 18, 2024 at 4:59 AM

Thriveni, thank you so much for the congratulations, Constance

Kim Rodrigues

September 17, 2024 at 5:36 PM

Wasn’t sure about th apostrophe after twirp but enjoyed. Congratulations, Constance!

Kim Rodrigues

September 18, 2024 at 5:34 AM

Gotcha! I took twirp more as a meeting of a silly or contemptible person. lol. Regardless, an enjoyable Than-Bauk :)

Constance La France

September 18, 2024 at 5:01 AM

Kim, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations, I put the apostrophe after twirp because the real word is twirping but could not use that because of the syllable restriction, Constance