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Poetry/Than-Bauk/Variation/Just For Me
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1670-696-03
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, September 03, 2024
For the International contest, Than-Bauk Variation
Sponsor, Kim Rodrigues, Judged 09/17/2024

Second Place

Oh, the birds tweet and their trills send a twirp' for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 9/23/2024 12:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:13:00 PM
Beata, thank you for the compliment, congrats, and comment, Constance
Date: 9/22/2024 12:09:00 PM
This is so sweet. Tweet tweet!! Congrats, dear heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:13:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats, your dear heart, Constance
Date: 9/20/2024 3:15:00 PM
Enjoyed this Constance. I have all my feeders just outside my kitchen window… sometimes it sounds more like a rainforest! Congrats. Terry
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2024 8:14:00 PM
Terry, thank you for the compliment, comment and congrats, I love listening to the birds ! Constance
Date: 9/19/2024 10:45:00 PM
So beautiful! Birdsongs ares so comforting always! Dear constance your take on the form is so melodious! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light always
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2024 8:15:00 PM
Ink, thank you for the complimnt, lovely comment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 9:32:00 AM
Terrific than-bauk. Can't count the times I have sat in my swing, listening to the birds imagining words they repeat over and over. Congratulations, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2024 8:15:00 PM
Reason, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, I love listening to the birds also, Constance
Date: 9/17/2024 10:02:00 PM
congratulations dear poet.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2024 4:59:00 AM
Thriveni, thank you so much for the congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/17/2024 5:36:00 PM
Wasn’t sure about th apostrophe after twirp but enjoyed. Congratulations, Constance!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2024 5:34:00 AM
Gotcha! I took twirp more as a meeting of a silly or contemptible person. lol. Regardless, an enjoyable Than-Bauk :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2024 5:01:00 AM
Kim, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations, I put the apostrophe after twirp because the real word is twirping but could not use that because of the syllable restriction, Constance
Date: 9/3/2024 8:46:00 PM
sweet sweet sweet. happy writing dear poet friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2024 11:31:00 AM
Thriveni, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, Constance

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