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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 March 02
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the judge was angered at the repeating drunkard now he is tuckered
for he heard enough of his lies and made-up stuff cause of the handcuff
claimed he was not drunk blamed the other guy that punk ~meaning the tree trunk
defendant will rise looking at the evidence he's telling the truth
that's ridiculous he's innocent and the guilt ~falls on the tree trunk
proved himself sober at the masquerade party ~tree trunk who got drunk

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Date: 3/25/2024 3:29:00 PM
Oh this was a tale and a spin and a laugh all at once and a great example of some amazing senryus! I may have to try to have a go or drunkards stumble at such, warm wishes, C
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/25/2024 4:46:00 PM
I am grateful, Charlotte, and hopeful as I've given ample time than most sponsors in their contest, since mines that you've noted that I e'er so oft entertain a twist of the mundane forms that aplenty has accustomed themselves. Enjoy, Aloha, William.
Date: 3/6/2024 9:45:00 AM
Very clever!
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Date: 3/6/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thanks, Karen, Aloha, William
Date: 3/3/2024 8:33:00 AM
Hilo, this is a real fun poem to read and great example for your contest, hard to beat this one but methinks I have an idea, hugs, Constance
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Date: 3/3/2024 8:51:00 AM
I hope 35 give it a whirl, hoping, they'll be some great ones out there--you as well, Constance. I'm still hurdling the new setup TPS left us sponsors having just done my DARK E-Y-E Rhyme, it's tougher now, thanks, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 3/2/2024 4:01:00 PM
yep, pretty humorous and creative Senyrus...the last one made me smile :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 3/2/2024 5:18:00 PM
Methinks the contest will be a bit hard given the Paradox/Parody factor, Sara. Might give it a whirl, my friend. Aloha, William

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