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I tripped on a cloud and fell-a eight miles high I tore my mind on a jagged sky ~Mickey Newberry compartments and partitions in through daydreams out through nightmares prescriptions and non null and into the void of expansion spirit and soul confined then not I talk to God while the Devil is eavesdropping

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Date: 4/15/2024 4:26:00 PM
dangerous eavesdropper was an original expression. Liked it. He's there, he's every where and even has the audacity to do so while we're talking with God.
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Date: 4/15/2024 8:26:00 AM
Thanks for such a finely penned poem and a dangerous eavesdropper, we must be aware of his presence.
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Date: 4/15/2024 8:54:00 AM
Yes, indeed. We must be wary.

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