Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

Just Down the Road

Just down the road
can't you see our future 
There it is, bright and bold
a story waiting to be told
Just down the road

Added 05/09/14 just so you know

Just down the road
It's closer than you know
There's a family that will love us
And obey the God above us
Just down the road

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Skat A May 23, 2014 at 9:20 PM wonderful win Jerry....SKAT

Kelly Deschler May 18, 2014 at 7:51 PM I liked the idea that heaven isn't too far away, if we know where to look.... A nice write, Jerry! Congrats on your win! Jerry T Curtis May 19, 2014 at 2:11 PM Thank you Kelly, I just hope heaven isn't here, That would be a bitter disappointment, Lol

Richard Palmer May 7, 2014 at 6:12 AM in Jamaica we say,,,right around the next corner,,nice,short and spicy,,love it Jerry Jerry T Curtis May 7, 2014 at 5:56 PM Tanks Mon, I mean thank you Richard, I have one other friend from Jamaica and his name is also Richard. What a cawinkiedink !

Barbara Gorelick May 6, 2014 at 8:55 AM Short and sweet. This is why I like short forms. Keep my fingers crossed for you..I would place this high up on the list. BG Jerry T Curtis May 6, 2014 at 7:45 PM Thank you Barbara, I started out to write a larger work,but when I reached the fifth line, there was nothing more to say

Dr.Ram Mehta May 6, 2014 at 5:57 AM Nice write on just down the road, Jerry Jerry T Curtis May 6, 2014 at 7:42 PM Thank you Dr. Ram

Toquyen Harrell May 5, 2014 at 8:13 PM Lol, love it, Jerry :) Awesome! Jerry T Curtis May 5, 2014 at 8:16 PM Thank you Toquyen, it 's the way I have always viewed life.