Just Don'T Give Up

After hearing your gentle voice on the phone,
I jumped off of the bunk, and wrote this short poem.

Such a simple thing,  a 10 minute call,
I can't explain,  just means it all.

I miss you even more, as my time comes near,
For me to pack up, finally get out of here.

Take you home, lock the door,
Hold you tight, forever more.

Take you away from the stress and grief,
Let's make a new life, and finally start to believe.

Find the happiness we have been looking for,
Let our new start begin, when I walk out of this door.

Don't look back, let's aim for the top,
We will be there soon, never stop.

There's no words to express ,what you mean to me,
I believe in my heart, this is what "true love" must be.

Just don't give up, my sweet lil' doll,
Soon I will be home, once and for all...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 9:10 AM
This is an excellent piece friend. Welcome to poetrysoup and I hope we get to read more of this masterpiece of yours.
Boughner Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Thanks, fellow poet....
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March 5, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Thank you. I have a wide selection of poems written in some dark placeside. Unfortunately....
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