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Just Do It

How might you feel if you chose life that strayed away from discontent?
I wonder, would you smile awhile or hatch new schemes to circumvent?
Do you believe we have the choice to “live!” despite our circumstance,
and love our lives through thick and thin; even in our sadness, choose to dance?

Would you deem it possible to find sweet blessing through the pain;
conceive that with our every breath, we may find hope to thrive again? 
Might you choose a path that suits you better than the one before;
consider change; rearrange one piece to open unseen doors?

Could you imagine, would you
imagine
just for laughs or on a dare;
can you picture
everything
within your grasp?

Pull up a chair!!

Now, listen up, and listen good ~
This life awaits; it calls for you!
Now grab it with those filthy paws,
and show us all that you can do!

Go for it !!


*Slightly edited since posting... an old piece that really needed it. Thank you for your patience :)

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Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther November 22, 2022 at 2:16 AM Good morning Hello There. Up early morning I decided to Read your poem JUST DO IT. IM IN LOVE with your words. I think its a mini MASTER PIECE. YOU WENT FAR with This. Keep up the good work. Hello There December 11, 2022 at 7:48 PM Wow, thank you so much, VAL..! I really appreciate your feedback.

Quoth Theraven February 9, 2020 at 1:18 AM Hello Hello, Hmmm...show me a better way..,show me life. -Richard Hello There February 14, 2020 at 9:28 AM Indeed... Thank you, Richard :)

Silent One January 28, 2020 at 3:06 PM A poem full of inspiration... Great spirit Hello There January 28, 2020 at 10:12 PM Thank you, Silent One ~ I really appreciate your kind words and visit :)

Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2020 at 1:19 PM Hello -Hello There, you have a very good message in this poetry you created. have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 19, 2020 at 10:25 AM Hello -Hello There, you are welcome. Have a nice day my friend. Hello There January 18, 2020 at 6:43 PM Thank you so much, Darlene :) It's a much older piece that needed some airing out ;) I really appreciate your visit and kind remarks!

Chris Green January 17, 2020 at 3:55 PM High five on this one HT. What an uplifting and motivating poem. I'm with you...go for it and you are sure to come out on top or you can always dance. : ) Hello There January 17, 2020 at 4:04 PM High five back right back at ya! To come out on top would be awesome! To dance more freely again is a sign, for me at least, of coming out on top ;) Thank you so much, Chris!! :)

Vijay Pandit January 17, 2020 at 3:39 PM The photo is bouncing in inspiration--so are the wisdom words you wrote, HT. Your poem reigns confidence and encouragement. What a wonderful thought to ponder: accepting that with every breath, we’re given strength to start again? Hello There January 18, 2020 at 1:29 AM I've edited this some, my friend, so those words have changed some... ;) Hello There January 17, 2020 at 4:01 PM Lol. I thought to change this very active photo to something more subdued until I saw your comment...hehehe. Thank you so much, Vijay, for the wonderful comments ~ always :)