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How might you feel if you chose life that strayed away from discontent? I wonder, would you smile awhile or hatch new schemes to circumvent? Do you believe we have the choice to “live!” despite our circumstance, and love our lives through thick and thin; even in our sadness, choose to dance? Would you deem it possible to find sweet blessing through the pain; conceive that with our every breath, we may find hope to thrive again? Might you choose a path that suits you better than the one before; consider change; rearrange one piece to open unseen doors? Could you imagine, would you imagine just for laughs or on a dare; can you picture everything within your grasp? Pull up a chair!! Now, listen up, and listen good ~ This life awaits; it calls for you! Now grab it with those filthy paws, and show us all that you can do! Go for it !!
*Slightly edited since posting... an old piece that really needed it. Thank you for your patience :)

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Date: 2/9/2020 1:18:00 AM
Hello Hello, Hmmm...show me a better way..,show me life. -Richard
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Date: 2/14/2020 9:28:00 AM
Indeed... Thank you, Richard :)
Date: 1/28/2020 3:06:00 PM
A poem full of inspiration... Great spirit
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Date: 1/28/2020 10:12:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One ~ I really appreciate your kind words and visit :)
Date: 1/18/2020 1:19:00 PM
Hello -Hello There, you have a very good message in this poetry you created. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/19/2020 10:25:00 AM
Hello -Hello There, you are welcome. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/18/2020 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene :) It's a much older piece that needed some airing out ;) I really appreciate your visit and kind remarks!
Date: 1/17/2020 3:55:00 PM
High five on this one HT. What an uplifting and motivating poem. I'm with you...go for it and you are sure to come out on top or you can always dance. : )
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Date: 1/17/2020 4:04:00 PM
High five back right back at ya! To come out on top would be awesome! To dance more freely again is a sign, for me at least, of coming out on top ;) Thank you so much, Chris!! :)
Date: 1/17/2020 3:39:00 PM
The photo is bouncing in inspiration--so are the wisdom words you wrote, HT. Your poem reigns confidence and encouragement. What a wonderful thought to ponder: accepting that with every breath, we’re given strength to start again?
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Date: 1/18/2020 1:29:00 AM
I've edited this some, my friend, so those words have changed some... ;)
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Date: 1/17/2020 4:01:00 PM
Lol. I thought to change this very active photo to something more subdued until I saw your comment...hehehe. Thank you so much, Vijay, for the wonderful comments ~ always :)