Notes About The Poem
There are many miraculous accounts from old journals
of LDS pioneers who crossed the plains in the 1800's
to make a home in Utah. This is my sonnet rendition
of one such story which I read about in a church magazine.
Here is just one source where you can read about this faithful
woman:
http://ldswomenshistory.blogspot.com/2010/03/mary-ann-mellor-and-louisa-mellor-clark.html )</center>

Just Desserts of the Faithful

The Martin Handcart Company endured
a frightful winter in their journey west.
Yet through it all, they would not be deterred,
for with strong faith and hope these Saints were blessed.

Louisa Mellor, in her journal, gave
accountings of their hardships in the cold
and told of how they struggled to be brave
while many died, especially the old.

They'd shovel snowy roads, and they would wade
through icy streams; her mom once stayed behind,
kissed them bye and wept; Louisa stayed
and prayed.  When she arose, what did she find?

The Lord must not hate sweets, for she would spy
nearby on snow for sustenance a PIE!

*There are many miraculous accounts from old journals
of LDS pioneers who crossed the plains in the 1800's
to make a home in Utah. This is my sonnet rendition
of one such story which I read about in a church magazine.
Here is just one source where you can read about this faithful 
woman:
http://ldswomenshistory.blogspot.com/2010/03/mary-ann-mellor-and-louisa-mellor-clark.html )

For the FAITH contest of  Diane Christian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Watt Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 11:39 PM
The west was no place for the weak. I like how you turned this account of the faithful into an historically based sonnet.
Horsman Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 10:18 AM
having lived both in New Zealand and Australia, Andrea, the old pioneers have a special place in my thoughts, we own them a lot, where ever in the world they ventured.. this is a lovely dedication to them all....
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 10:35 PM
I love your enjambment... (I think I said that before!) This is a wonderful look back into history. Those old settlers endured so much in their journey toward a new home. Well done, Andrea! Best wishes, Keith
Horne Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 12:25 PM
wow, I love this fascinating write, Andrea
Babcock Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 9:10 AM
Congrats on your win on the contest. Wow, that is an amazing story. love phyl
Taylor Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Johnson Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 3:24 PM
should have been much higher. Interesting. I clicked on "About this Poem" but got nothing but ads. J
Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Diane's "Faith" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 1:02 PM
A most beautiful and meaningful entry Andie. Soup mail
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 4:39 AM
Yes,a captivating story here Andrea.Very nice write on faith.Enjoyed.
Johnson Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 2:53 AM
manna from heaven , faith to bread or cake, the lord is mysterious , 4 miracles we do ache....
Johnson Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 2:53 PM
Talk about mana from heaven. You do teach us many things Andrea. It is amazing where you will see your faith if you just look. Thank you for your comment on Sultry City Sidewalks. I wrote it for the contest. Luck to you and yours. That's what Gomer used to always say. :)
Maverick Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 2:36 PM
This was truly intriguing and inspiring to learn of Andrea; also.." I notice 3 ha'ha's as in ha ha ha, that you thought me worthy of L O L.." I thought I'd probably earned a few more than that you know!! now ya see how there's just no pleasing some folks..)
Grisetti Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 9:15 AM
A wonderful story, all the more so because it is true. Best of luck in the faith contest. I like your title.
Michelle Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:59 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE! (You're Mormon, I just know it!) LOVE< =Juli-Michelle=
May Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:49 AM
another beautiful sonnet Andrea....good luck in the contest...hugs...Joseph
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:37 AM
Great story told and wonderful that someone would perserve the journal..Winners' circle for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara
Ishmael Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:10 AM
like it alot That's a beautiful expressed story poem. I enjoyed reading it,thank you my friend andrea
Peranteau Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:08 AM
This was a tragic story ! 280 soul perished because of their faith ! Awesome for you to reignite this story from so many years ago dear poet. Wow ! Nice job Andrea ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james....Soup mail in a minute
Goller Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 10:03 PM
That's a beautiful expressed story poem. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich.
Sivey Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 9:08 PM
What a glorious write my friend! I just love the message you gave us! I would sure like to have a piece of that pie right now! Do you think it was, butterscotch pie? Ha Ha! What a magnificent poem Andrea, I really enjoyed it! Great Work!!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 8:37 PM
WONDERFUL POEM, WINNING WISHES!!!
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