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Just Bloomed

Just bloomed,
dark crimson
geraniums. 
Freshly planted in pots…
next door!



5/6/19

Contest: Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 - Cinqku - Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Dear Heart


5/28/19 submitted to MAY PREMIER 8 any 4 or 5 line form,on any theme' Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Your poem conveys such vibrant imagery of flowers, with the artful twist of being admired from afar. So beautifully done, Tania. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Kitchin Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Thank you Susan for your nice comments! :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Thank you Line! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 5:39 PM
cute! Congrats on your win
Kitchin Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 6:11 PM
Thank you Andrea! :)
Haight Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Ha Ha...is that always the way! Nice Cinqku, Tania, with a surprise ending. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Kitchin Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Thank you Sandra! :)
La France Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Tania,congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem. Lovely image too !
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Thank you Constance for your nice comments and my placement in your contest! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:33 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Tania :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 4:27 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
May Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Very nicely done ... Congrats on your win Tania..
Kitchin Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 8:27 PM
Thank you Joe!
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 6:28 PM
You pictured it as lovely with words as the illustration did with a visual. Congrats on your win
Kitchin Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 8:27 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:43 PM
A lovely cinqku! Certainly we enjoy the gifts that our neighbors share :) and the poets that likewise share.
Kitchin Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Thank you Kim!
Horne Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 2:22 PM
aww, hope they give you a cutting! love this
Kitchin Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Thank you Jack!
Onclaud Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 1:43 PM
ohh, lovely blooms with a greeat twist in the end, tania... i so wish they were yours!... what a fine piece !...huggs
Kitchin Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Thank you Nette! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:21 AM
- A beautiful flowering in this beautiful poem, Tania :) - Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 4:43 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Awtry Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 7:11 AM
This works very nicely! Love the in the moment feel it has and geraniums make me smile! Best of luck :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thank you and thanks for stopping by!
Michael Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:47 AM
An impressionable write...soothing imagery...
Kitchin Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Arturo!
Cunningham Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 3:29 AM
Nicely done Tania, I love the smell of them. Good luck. Tom.
Kitchin Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:29 AM
Thank you Tom!
Gauthier Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 7:44 PM
LOVE geraniums. Lovely poem, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, I love them too! Thanks for your nice comments! :)
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