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Just Believe

I hear them singing,
                                                     
just believe~just believe.
                                               
Angels of all sizes were singing their hearts out,
             
the heavenly choir with words they did weave.
The beautiful music and singing,
                                     
just believe~just believe.
                                               
It is heard loud and very clear,
                                       
welcoming~comforting the angels did achieve.
As we stand at the pearly gates we hear,
                         
just believe~just believe.
                                             
We wait our turn to be happy and not grieve,
                   
do we get in or must we leave.
 
Date Written: 12/29/2021
2 Place
"B'' Forms, 10 Plus lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/20/2022 11:02:00 AM
Paula, congratulations on your Second Place win in my B Forms contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/20/2022 11:37:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this "Just Believe" win in your wonderful contest. Glad you like this angel singing write. Have a Blessed Day writing away..................
Date: 1/10/2022 8:17:00 PM
You have ended the beautiful poem with challenges. Great work. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:22:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. Have a Blessed Day writing away..................
Date: 1/10/2022 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your outstanding and well-deserved win, Paula. You've written an exquisite poem that is full of wonderful concept metaphors.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2022 10:20:00 AM
Thank You, for writing for your congratulations and for your very kind words. You made my day. Glad you like this write. Have a Blessed Day writing away..................
Date: 12/31/2021 12:40:00 PM
I enjoyed this Paula, Blessings for the New Year ~ Debra
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2022 8:54:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a Blessed Day and New Year..................
Date: 12/30/2021 7:07:00 AM
Lovely words Paula…..I enjoyed this very much. Debx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this one. Have a Blessed Day and New Year 2022.................
Date: 12/29/2021 2:43:00 PM
A delightful proclamation of faith, Paula. Many fear death, but fail to see that it opens the door to eternal happiness. ~ Best regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, many fear death but only need to fear if you are not going to heaven. Have a Blessed Day and New Year 2022.................
Date: 12/29/2021 2:42:00 PM
You know Paula, every now and then a song comes along, and you just know they are tapping into something beyond this world, whatever that is, heaven or the universe I really don’t know, but it’s great to hear, cheers David
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2021 11:11:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Yes, let's sing with the angels. Have a Blessed Day and New Year 2022.................
Date: 12/29/2021 2:23:00 PM
Hopefully if we've led good lives then the gates of heaven will open for us. Happy New year Paula. Tom
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Date: 12/29/2021 1:48:00 PM
Great one Paula! I enjoyed this. I hope you have a Happy New Year :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2021 2:10:00 PM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this Just Believe write. Have a Blessed Day and New Year 2022.................

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