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Just Before Summertime

She wants that feel of summertime When everything seems to rhyme A courageous bird sailing over the mountains Rivers,waterfalls,subsidizing fountains A bud in the morning, delicate flower by evening An ever so perpetual meaning Swallowed up the sunshine You've never felt so divine The breeze gently playing with your hair Dancing in the tall grass, completely bare We found the treasure, but it needs a key Quite possibly it's the love from you and me We will never reach our peak Always something new to seek -Cody T. Nitz

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/2/2014 8:26:00 AM
Cody, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/29/2014 11:56:00 PM
Beautiful write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup - happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:29:00 PM
Cody, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:39:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Cody - I choose your first lovely written poem - Yes, "Always something new to seek" - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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