Joe Flach Poet Rhyme

Just Before My Lights Went Out

I held her naked in exhausted arms
Just before my lights went out
After passionately sampling her woman’s charms
Just before my lights went out

The beautiful wife of my best friend
A sin without a doubt
Who I saw approaching with a baseball bat
Just before my lights went out

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Lucilla Carrillo November 2, 2012 at 9:16 PM Good poem, but I just know that this can not be true. It's just a poem right. I hope your lights came back on. Take care just in case. Lucilla Joe Flach November 3, 2012 at 7:27 AM Lucilla, just like most of my poems, a lot of which I write in 1st person, this is pure fiction and the result of a warped mind. I am not sure how brigt my lights shine, but they have always stayed on.

Eileen Manassian November 2, 2012 at 10:25 AM Great Rhyme, Joe! Feel sorry for your best friend, but I guess he got his revenge! ;) I enjoyed reading this humorous poem!