Just Because I Said, I Do

Just because I said, I do
Does not mean I will
Pick up all my messes 
Wipe up every spill

You know that I'm a slob
But just what can I do
I hope you know I do my best
Trying to please you

And just because I said, I do
Doesn't mean I won't
Say that you snore too loud
Even though you don't

I know it's just the wind 
Blowing hard outside
Maybe it's a train
On clacking tracks it rides

So just because I said, I do
Does not mean I can't
Point out all your issues
And listen to you rant

Sometimes you descend on me
Like an eagle from the sky
Striking at my failures
The wounds still make me cry

I think just because I said, I do
You think that I always should
Do everything you ask of me
Because it's for my good

My love this does not work for me
And life's a long, long road
So please do me a favor
And lighten up the load

You think just because I said, I do
You own my very life
I say I'll share with you
And keep you as my wife

I'm not sure you like the deal
Your face is hard to read
And just because you said, I do
You soon must concede

I know just because I said, I do
That we will never part
And that is just fine with me
Because you have all my heart

I'll try my best for you 
Of this have no doubt
But when I do screw up
Please don't scream or pout

Just because I said, I do
I'll say one last thing
Forget all I said before
I 'm glad you wear my ring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 21, 2014 at 2:29 PM
Appreciate you comment!
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 7:27 AM
This is a very real look at a true love and marriage...congratulations on your win...
Clark Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Donna, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it. Steve
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:45 AM
Great write and congrats on the fine win, steven
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February 19, 2014 at 11:39 PM
Congratulations Steven, I love the fun and the feeling of true love after reading your poem. This one was my favorite. For certain reasons, .... You made me say... awweee to the ending, thank you... SKAT
Clark Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Skat, I thank you very much. I thoroughly enjoyed writing for your contest. The theme was awesome, thanks. As for the membership, I would be proud the be a part. Thank again. Steve
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February 19, 2014 at 11:41 PM
Steven, If you like, enjoy my new blog Enjoy the pictures I have chosen for my winning list.
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February 19, 2014 at 11:37 PM
Hello Steven, I was not expecting to have 3 first place. I mentioned a prize for the top #1. A Premium Membership. But, from past experience, some of the PM's my sisters or I awarded are not used. It is up to you to accept the second first place win. If you wish to pass it to the next winner. I totally understand. I'll give you a week to answer. love ~SKAT
Clark Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 7:25 PM
I do like this very much.
Smith Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Very nice. It had me smiling throughout.... Tim
Clark Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 11:28 PM
Thanks Tim, I'm glad you liked it
Jerden Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 8:42 PM
I like this a lot. Sounds like the lyrics to a country song to me. It took me almost to the end to understand the 'I do' part. You might want to consider putting it in quotes or find some way to make it clear that you are referring to wedding vows, unless you are being opaque on purpose. Also, 'snore to loud' should be 'snore too loud'. Cheers, Roy
Clark Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 11:27 PM
Roy, Thanks for the comment and especially for the advice. Steve
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