Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Just Beautiful

Something in my mind playing
also begins dancing around emotions
softly running around feelings deeply inside singing
from out off this heartbeats a drum 
in every single dream and thought darling explode 
a great awakening embracing your beauty hot
So warm words cannot describe how deep
this sails without wings for me 
Lights up each and every kissing vision
shimmering silver coats all treasures 
in mother of pearl clouds
spiraling wishes promised 
colors of a rainbow mist
looking at  jewels of the finest cut
Sparkling through one smile
feeling your love deep warmly touching very comforting
such a sweet delight sharing souls lovingly together
kissing inside out your words 
like sand blowing over storming kiss of deep devotion
I really love you

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Paul Schneiter October 16, 2014 at 9:54 PM Dear Liam, I cannot recall reading a poem so rich in marvelous, creative imagery as this one. It's a thing of beauty. Thanks for sharing it. Blessings on you and your loved ones. Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2014 at 10:03 PM and may the irish blessing of warm light shine over you paul heartfelt appreciated dear fiend thank you deeply truly wonderful comment

Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 9:56 AM ah gary your so sweet dear friend heartfelt beautiful comment thank you deeply bless you pal

Gary Bateman October 5, 2014 at 9:17 AM Liam, A truly compelling and heartfelt write here my friend. The beauty and depth of your emotion as portrayed here throughout the poem is obvious in each line. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary (P.S. I marked it as a Favorite!!) Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 9:58 AM sorry dear pal i posted your comment in the wrong slot sorry for the mistake dear friend

Eileen Manassian October 4, 2014 at 5:21 PM Kissing inside out your words....How lovely and sweet. Of course, that ending is sublime. This was a lovely write....as all of your sweet romantic writes, Liam. Liam Mcdaid October 4, 2014 at 5:38 PM thank you eileen wonderful comment very beautiful bless you truly appreciated

Juli- Michelle October 3, 2014 at 4:02 PM Just beautiful. :) Exactly how I would describe this poem and the lovely image you have painted in my mind with your words. Such talent :) Much enjoyed :) Have a wonderful day! -Juli-Michelle Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 5:56 PM ah juli michelle so sweet thank you for such kindness wonderful heartfelt comment deeply appreciated god bless

Charmaine Chircop October 3, 2014 at 2:59 PM Mother of pearl clouds/rainbow mist/sand blowing over storming kiss-Your verses are a vocabulary of beauty which keep expanding and reflecting the love and warmth in your heart to the one who comforts your soul.Yes so beautiful Liam !!Charma Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 5:49 PM so sweet charmaine really touching beautiful comment and so very true thank you deeply dear friend for such a wonderful comment god bless you

Nette Onclaud October 3, 2014 at 2:27 PM you sway with rhythm of love so grand... fine, fine write, liam.. huggs Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 5:25 PM nette so sweet dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you so kindly

Tim Smith October 3, 2014 at 1:19 PM Such a fitting title..love is grand...I am happy for you my friend Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 1:37 PM thank you tim for such a beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear friend

Hija De La Luna October 3, 2014 at 9:59 AM utterly beautiful write and sentiment, liam! Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 10:10 AM thank you for the very kind beautiful comment deeply appreciated hija

Richard Lamoureux October 3, 2014 at 8:07 AM Ain't love grand? This brought a smile to my face Liam. Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 8:22 AM i was smiling in beautiful thoughts when i wrote this filled with warmth for such beauty richard wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly truly appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2014 at 7:35 AM - Love is wonderful - As the headline says: Just beautiful! - Wish you a nice weekend, Liam! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 7:39 AM it sure can paint anne lise dear friend you have a great weekend also bless you

Demetrios Trifiatis October 3, 2014 at 4:12 AM If she is not convinced by this splendid and romantic poem that you love her, nothing will! A marvel of romanticism, dear Liam! Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 4:17 AM oh she knows she sparkles everything beautiful i write lately wonderful comment demetrios deeply appreciated dear friend

Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 2:26 AM what a tender romantic write Liam - she is a very lucky lady:-) hugs jan xxx Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 3:32 AM You are both blessed then Liam :-) Hugs Jan xxx Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 3:27 AM smiling finding such love jan really i am the lucky one never knew it existed wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2014 at 11:09 PM this one REALLY really makes us know that you love her!! A gem! Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 3:23 AM andrea thank you deeply wonderful comment sparkling truly appreciated dear friend

Arthur Vaso October 2, 2014 at 10:04 PM This is heartwarming and beautiful, sure hope she knows it!!! Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2014 at 3:18 AM smiling thank you arthur wonderful comment heartfelt