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Just Beautiful

Something in my mind playing also begins dancing around emotions softly running around feelings deeply inside singing from out off this heartbeats a drum in every single dream and thought darling explode a great awakening embracing your beauty hot So warm words cannot describe how deep this sails without wings for me Lights up each and every kissing vision shimmering silver coats all treasures in mother of pearl clouds spiraling wishes promised colors of a rainbow mist looking at jewels of the finest cut Sparkling through one smile feeling your love deep warmly touching very comforting such a sweet delight sharing souls lovingly together kissing inside out your words like sand blowing over storming kiss of deep devotion I really love you

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Date: 10/16/2014 9:54:00 PM
Dear Liam, I cannot recall reading a poem so rich in marvelous, creative imagery as this one. It's a thing of beauty. Thanks for sharing it. Blessings on you and your loved ones.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 10:03:00 PM
and may the irish blessing of warm light shine over you paul heartfelt appreciated dear fiend thank you deeply truly wonderful comment
Date: 10/5/2014 9:56:00 AM
ah gary your so sweet dear friend heartfelt beautiful comment thank you deeply bless you pal
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Date: 10/5/2014 9:17:00 AM
Liam, A truly compelling and heartfelt write here my friend. The beauty and depth of your emotion as portrayed here throughout the poem is obvious in each line. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary (P.S. I marked it as a Favorite!!)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 9:58:00 AM
sorry dear pal i posted your comment in the wrong slot sorry for the mistake dear friend
Date: 10/4/2014 5:21:00 PM
Kissing inside out your words....How lovely and sweet. Of course, that ending is sublime. This was a lovely write....as all of your sweet romantic writes, Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 5:38:00 PM
thank you eileen wonderful comment very beautiful bless you truly appreciated
Date: 10/3/2014 4:02:00 PM
Just beautiful. :) Exactly how I would describe this poem and the lovely image you have painted in my mind with your words. Such talent :) Much enjoyed :) Have a wonderful day! -Juli-Michelle
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 5:56:00 PM
ah juli michelle so sweet thank you for such kindness wonderful heartfelt comment deeply appreciated god bless
Date: 10/3/2014 2:59:00 PM
Mother of pearl clouds/rainbow mist/sand blowing over storming kiss-Your verses are a vocabulary of beauty which keep expanding and reflecting the love and warmth in your heart to the one who comforts your soul.Yes so beautiful Liam !!Charma
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 5:49:00 PM
so sweet charmaine really touching beautiful comment and so very true thank you deeply dear friend for such a wonderful comment god bless you
Date: 10/3/2014 2:27:00 PM
you sway with rhythm of love so grand... fine, fine write, liam.. huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 5:25:00 PM
nette so sweet dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you so kindly
Date: 10/3/2014 1:19:00 PM
Such a fitting title..love is grand...I am happy for you my friend
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 1:37:00 PM
thank you tim for such a beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear friend
Date: 10/3/2014 9:59:00 AM
utterly beautiful write and sentiment, liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 10:10:00 AM
thank you for the very kind beautiful comment deeply appreciated hija
Date: 10/3/2014 8:07:00 AM
Ain't love grand? This brought a smile to my face Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 8:22:00 AM
i was smiling in beautiful thoughts when i wrote this filled with warmth for such beauty richard wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly truly appreciated
Date: 10/3/2014 7:35:00 AM
- Love is wonderful - As the headline says: Just beautiful! - Wish you a nice weekend, Liam! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 7:39:00 AM
it sure can paint anne lise dear friend you have a great weekend also bless you
Date: 10/3/2014 4:12:00 AM
If she is not convinced by this splendid and romantic poem that you love her, nothing will! A marvel of romanticism, dear Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 4:17:00 AM
oh she knows she sparkles everything beautiful i write lately wonderful comment demetrios deeply appreciated dear friend
Date: 10/3/2014 2:26:00 AM
what a tender romantic write Liam - she is a very lucky lady:-) hugs jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2014 3:32:00 AM
You are both blessed then Liam :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 3:27:00 AM
smiling finding such love jan really i am the lucky one never knew it existed wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 10/2/2014 11:09:00 PM
this one REALLY really makes us know that you love her!! A gem!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 3:23:00 AM
andrea thank you deeply wonderful comment sparkling truly appreciated dear friend
Date: 10/2/2014 10:04:00 PM
This is heartwarming and beautiful, sure hope she knows it!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 3:18:00 AM
smiling thank you arthur wonderful comment heartfelt

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