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Just Be Still

Just be still when bliss beats cascade Resist not love’s embrace Enjoy soul’s consciousness upgrade Enabled by God’s grace Awareness perceptive Tranquil and receptive Sidesteps fears deceptive Voids will fill Just be still 04-March-2023 Quietus

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Katharine L. Sparrow

Date: 3/4/2023 4:49:00 PM

Oh, this is so calming and reassuring. I like the varying rhyme pattern too. This is a nice one to read over in a moment of stress, which happen all too often. Nicely done.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/4/2023 6:27:00 PM

Thank you, Katharine. Where remains stress when imaginary bubbles of fears and desires burst noiselessly in the void?

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/4/2023 1:32:00 PM

Yes yes yes …. Voids will fill … just be still . There is magic in stillness as you know very well Unseeking Seeker. Gifts and knowledge received in those quiet moments. Beautifully expressed ! Blessings, Susan :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/4/2023 6:24:00 PM

Thank you, Susan ~ yes of course, it is as you say, with each journey unique, wisdom downloads offer clarity as identity finally slowly disintegrates, finally revealing who we are in reality, unmistakably.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/3/2023 11:18:00 PM

lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/3/2023 11:25:00 PM

Thank you, dear Gina ~ hope you are doing well