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Just Another Heartbreak

You told me you loved me And want me as your wife You pursued me hard With promises of a new life But like the others before It was just another lie I’m once again broken hearted All I can do is cry We had been good friends for years That’s why I trusted you Now I’m just feeling lost I don’t know what to do The pain is just too much I can’t eat or sleep I’m just a mess again Because I fell too deep Why do I punish my heart like this This cycle needs to end I can’t keep dealing with heartbreak I need to try to mend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/8/2018 1:01:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work. I hope it is not based on recent heartbreak but on past experience or on another's heartbreak that they were telling you about. Enjoyed reading ..Welcome to soup. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2018 10:28:00 AM
Lorna, there is always hope for real love to be a part of your life. My sympathetic feelings evoke my empathetic feelings for you. I wish for you the man of your dreams to be a man of integrity who will see you for the truly wonderful person I perceive you to be. I see in your writing a person who cares so deeply for others that she becomes easily hurt because of the apparent uncaring nature of those whom you look to for love. If that man could grasp his great fortune in feeling your love!!
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Date: 11/25/2018 3:44:00 PM
Time heals pain... and love ends a broken heart.. deep and emotive poem..
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