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Just Another Day

Overwhelming skies
Bursting with colours so bright
Encompassing souls
With that brilliant star of gold
That lifts a spirit so "blue"

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James Fraser

April 12, 2011 at 11:24 AM

Many congratulation's Brandee on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles

John Freeman

March 23, 2011 at 8:27 PM

Great to see you in the top 6. Brandee, with this worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

March 23, 2011 at 1:45 PM

emotion and nature woven exquisitly. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

March 23, 2011 at 8:49 AM

Oh, I really like the way you describe the sun's golden rays lifting blue spirits, Brandee. That's so true! Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

March 23, 2011 at 6:23 AM

Amazing write here Brandee!Congrats on your win--kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 23, 2011 at 4:57 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Brandee in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2011 at 10:23 PM

I love how you took this one to the gold star lifting the blue spirit. Congratulations.

Harry Horsman

March 22, 2011 at 9:09 PM

What a wonderful poem, Brandee, a little different yet so awesome. congrats. Harry

Tahera Mannan

March 22, 2011 at 8:56 PM

Oh Brandee I love this thought. Very warm congrats for this win.

Gwendolen Song

March 22, 2011 at 6:58 PM

You are right. When the skies burst with color, it can become overwhelming and lift one's spirits. Medicine from nature-medicine from our creator. Congrats. Gwendolen

Francine Roberts

March 22, 2011 at 4:29 PM

lovely tanka Brandee, congrats on your win in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 22, 2011 at 12:29 PM

Congrats Brandee on your super win in the blue and gold contest with these awesome words depicting the colors so well luv.. enjoy another sweet success ...