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Just Another Day

~ I gaze at the sunrise, it’s apricot view While spending my morning just thinking of you It’s glow on the heavens a magical scene Of lemonade wishes and cantaloupe sheen Though still it is muted an off color shade As something is missing this dawn now displayed For until your beautiful smile comes my way This morn will be merely just another day ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/28/2019 10:01:00 AM
Chris congratulations my friend - love the line an apricot view as the sky often has this color - a deserved honor of POTD. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2019 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 12/26/2019 6:46:00 AM
A luscious poem of impeccable taste, Chris. Kudos on POTD. Hats doff, in Prestige fashion, to your sequin pen. Love and happy holidays.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thanks my friend. I will check it out when I get a chance.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/26/2019 6:50:00 AM
Btw ... I have a poem w/the same title. I posted it on 12-21-16. Column #14 in my archive file. It's not a Romantic gem like yours, but hey, it's ghetto approved. lol! Love and peace, dear friend.
Date: 12/25/2019 6:33:00 AM
Hi Chris, I'm just coming back to congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Merry Christmas:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi
Date: 12/25/2019 2:46:00 AM
Chris, A lovely poetic gift for us at Christmas. Congratulations on having this beautiful romantic poem honored with POTD my friend! Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Connie for your kind thoughts
Date: 12/24/2019 9:28:00 PM
You write of love, as it were dipped in sweetness. Honey oozes from your pen. Strawberries and cream have caressed moments from pen, perhaps a little more. As always, your thoughts bring a smile and a soft sigh. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so very much Brandy
Date: 12/24/2019 7:40:00 PM
the fruits of your labours have paid off with POTD, many congrats Chris and happy Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan
Date: 12/24/2019 2:34:00 PM
Playful and Sweet...Congratulations Chris on POTD
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Arturo
Date: 12/24/2019 12:50:00 PM
Chris, I love the "lemonade wishes"! Beautiful poem and perfect cadence. Terri Stiles
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Terri
Date: 12/24/2019 11:07:00 AM
So beautiful and descriptive. Congratulations on POTD. Warmest Wishes~Warren
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you Warren
Date: 12/24/2019 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this magical romantic verse. Congratulations on POTD. have a wonderful Merry Christmas
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you much Eve.
Date: 12/24/2019 8:40:00 AM
Since I commented on this yesterday, your fruits have ripened and are even sweeter today. potd...When you see this remember what I mentioned to you about dates, and I don't mean the Medjool kind.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 12/24/2019 8:31:00 AM
Just another day for a POTD!!...Congrats!! Chris...you old smoothy...Have the happiest of Holidays my friend...see you next year lol...^WW^ :o)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:52:00 AM
Thanks so much WW
Date: 12/24/2019 6:58:00 AM
Congrats Chris on poem of the day..beautiful hues in this lovely poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 12/24/2019 6:41:00 AM
Beautifully penned Chris, congratulations on POTD!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Tania.
Date: 12/24/2019 5:25:00 AM
So glad to see this as POTD it’s such a beautiful poem worth reading over and over again! Congratulations Chris on the honors .. Your poetry always shines to me :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate you Sandy.
Date: 12/24/2019 5:22:00 AM
So romantic. Wonderful. Well said. Congratulations on POTD. Kind wishes, Kai
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2019 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Kai
Date: 12/23/2019 3:08:00 PM
Chris, Not just another write in this poem 'Just another day'. Reminded me of Paul McCartney's song 'Another Day'. -Richard
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 3:08:00 PM
That's a huge compliment. Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 12/23/2019 3:03:00 PM
This is beautiful. I am happy to hear a smile came your way Chris. A great poem , well expressed :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I hope you have a Merry Christmas Heidi.
Date: 12/23/2019 1:46:00 PM
A colorful extravaganza! Yet nothing compares to the smile of your love.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Kim. That's about it. :)
Date: 12/23/2019 1:36:00 PM
Well it's another poem I could only dream to be able to have written. Beautifully penned my friend...Ron :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend for your kind remarks. You are very talented Ron, don't kid yourself.
Date: 12/23/2019 9:29:00 AM
What a way to start the day, hope yours is a great one! Thanks for sharing your apricots and cantaloupe!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 9:38:00 AM
Good morning John. I hope your day is wonderful as well.
Date: 12/23/2019 9:28:00 AM
WoW! Chris I often think to myself , who is he writing such beautiful poems for . Your last stanza sums of this well written perfectly . It made me sigh and smile. Well done. Have wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/23/2019 11:34:00 AM
Aww... What a nice thing to say. You see the big smile on my face:-)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. Maybe I am writing them for you. : ) I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 12/23/2019 8:48:00 AM
Aw one can feel the longing. I hope that smile comes your way soon and brightens your already beautiful day :). Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:50:00 AM
My smile is in full bloom now. Thank you my friend, your wonderful thoughts always bring a smile to my face.
Date: 12/23/2019 8:33:00 AM
Sweet sentimental write this morning, Chris, but you've made me hungry with apricots, cantaloupe and lemonade.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin. I am happy this one stirred your appetite. :)

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