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Just Another Day

Just another day For so little pay; There surely must be A better way. To bury one's brain And everything smart, Playing the lead part In the death of a heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/9/2018 9:51:00 AM
Cool thought wave poem, Gershon. I know the vibe all too well emanating from the words of this turbo H2O poem. Mighty fine poetry. Love and more love always.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2018 1:06:00 PM
I guess we all live through something like this at some point(s) in our lives...Hopefully, we burst through to find the sunshine. Warm wishes! ~Gershon
Date: 3/8/2018 1:30:00 PM
Profound, and succinct; explains the reason many drop out of the rat race and why we call it that.
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:18:00 PM
Yup---I used to be an executive recruiter in 'another life.' In the life before that I was a banker. Can you imagine? (I can't anymore)...
Date: 3/7/2018 9:29:00 PM
O Gershon, this sounds familiar... Well done.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2018 10:18:00 PM
It was the story of my life up to age 40, for the most part anyway...Luckily for me, life really did begin at 40! I'm a truly lucky fellow. Thanks for commenting, as always. Best wishes, gw