Just After Daylight

Pale yellow full moon
So close seems that touching trees
Still shining this morn

Touch in distant lands
Come shine on ocean water
Touch this distant shore


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Williams Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 11:56 AM
Hi Sara .... soothingly beautiful work... and so complete in such short lines.. very well done indeed. Thank you Sara for all your recent comments on my poems... most appreciated. :)
Higgins Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Wonderful imagery in this piece..hope your shore gets touched.
Fraser Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 6:10 AM
Lovely imagery in this Haiku Sara>>James
Arteaga Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 5:49 AM
each word drew me in to visualize it, very nice haiku, feels good inside
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