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Just After Daylight

Pale yellow full moon So close seems that touching trees Still shining this morn Touch in distant lands Come shine on ocean water Touch this distant shore (For you)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/7/2009 11:56:00 AM
Hi Sara .... soothingly beautiful work... and so complete in such short lines.. very well done indeed. Thank you Sara for all your recent comments on my poems... most appreciated. :)
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Date: 8/7/2009 7:44:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this piece..hope your shore gets touched.
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Date: 8/7/2009 6:10:00 AM
Lovely imagery in this Haiku Sara>>James
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Date: 8/7/2009 5:49:00 AM
each word drew me in to visualize it, very nice haiku, feels good inside
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