Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

Just a Woman

As a woman, I am vain. I saw myself being loved
and adored, without thinking that illusion is like a 
ROSE - it only lives for a short time.

You talked to me about your love and made me feel 
so special. With your words you hypnotized me and
made me go into a daze.

I imagined myself being in heaven - a heaven so blue
with only you. Taking advantage of my daze, you said,
let me kneel so I can adore you. Seeing you on your 
knees - I gave you a kiss.

I kissed you with fire, I kissed you with passion.  It's
not your fault and it's not mine - for love and passion
are not a crime.

I have to confess, that a kiss of passion - even if it 
almost drives you insane - it's the greatest pleasure
you can feel, when two people feel the same.

I'm just a woman - what do you know? If I'm having a 
dream, it feels so real. So why don't you come and
awaken me and make my dream become real... 

Copyright:  Written By Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Bl Devnath April 21, 2013 at 1:44 PM BASED ON REALITY OF LIFE, HERE MANY ARE HELPLESS AND CAN'T AVOID. WAY OF APPEALING IS NICELY DONE. LOVED ALWAYS, BL

Iris Gonzal March 5, 2013 at 11:39 AM This was so beautiful. I loved it! A Kiss of passion is to die for.

Tamara Dunston February 24, 2013 at 2:00 AM Very nice, love it, love it, love it!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe January 29, 2013 at 1:46 PM Bittersweet... bitter because it was only a dream, sweet because of the beauty of your message. May your dream become reality! Best wishes, Keith

Harry Horsman January 28, 2013 at 2:10 PM beautiful poetry, and one where your question deserves to be answeered...,

Connie Gildersleeve January 24, 2013 at 1:34 PM Couldn't wait to see what happened at the end, a dream, did expect that. All though love dreams can be steamy. Lol warm Smiles, Connie

Dan Kearley January 23, 2013 at 7:33 PM You really got to me here,Lucilla. Words of the heart written with passion. :o)

Robert Pettit January 23, 2013 at 10:47 AM Nice way to describe love. In your second verse, "hipnotized" is correctly spelled "hypnotized". Everything else looks good.

Bl Devnath January 23, 2013 at 10:42 AM Appealing poem. Wonderful expression. Loved always, my friend, bl

Sara Kendrick January 22, 2013 at 1:25 PM Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..To be awaken from a romatic dream would be good only if it wasn't a dream..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 22, 2013 at 7:51 AM This is a stunner xx

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2013 at 12:29 AM is this for the fantasy contest? If not, I think it should be. I really enjoyed reading this one. Finally I have to get off here. YOu are my last poem for the night (I mean morning now!!!)

Sukmawati Komala January 21, 2013 at 9:18 PM dear sweet Lucilla... very impressive... thank you my poetess..enjoyed so much your penned ... <3

Russell Sivey January 21, 2013 at 5:25 PM What a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! A great display of want and desire, to be filled with passion yet again! I loved reading this fine poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Debbie Guzzi January 21, 2013 at 3:23 PM Ahh to dream..yes..I bet you have had a lot of great kisses. Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A January 21, 2013 at 3:17 PM Lucy, a beautiful poem... the ending made me think of a small part from one of Edgar Allen P. quote.. "" ___a dream with in a dream ______ "" Are we nearly just standing by, till we are woken by the perfect maker... I like my day dreams... sometimes I wish a few of them were reality. nice open expression. love~LINDA

Michael J. Falotico January 21, 2013 at 1:22 PM Beautiful piece form the heart... Love it.. xoox Michael

Demetrios Trifiatis January 21, 2013 at 11:52 AM My dear a woman is not just a woman she is: WOMAN Woman: this masterpiece of divine Inspiration, That is a challenging ladder for any man to climb Which may lead him to heaven Or to hell, Pending on his understanding, of her, Degree! ©Demetrios Trifiatis 9 December 2012 Read also Cupid if you wish. EXCELLENT piece of potry. Full of deep, real, feelings. Written by the heart!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2013 at 11:32 AM Without love, the "rose" die. - Without water "rose" will thirst. - Without light "rose" will fade. - Without a hand to hold, the "rose" being lonely. - Everybody needs LOVE!! - Lovely Lucilla my dear friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)