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Just a Thought 1

Raking, through the ashes Shivers rolling up my spine, Knowing, some similar day These embers will be mine. © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 12:52:00 AM

rereading this one and still loving it. sad as it is!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2011 6:48:00 AM

yikers what part is about hair or funny harry I just want to come HUG you too sad! Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2011 6:22:00 PM

a thought well written, enjoyed your write, nice form of write, enjoyed your entry good luck on the contest,..p.d.

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/20/2011 5:29:00 AM

Just a thought you say Harry? You say so much here, I absolutely love it.. All the best for Rick's contest ;) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2011 2:29:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Not sure exactly the intented interpertation...Good luck in the contest..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2011 1:04:00 PM

Now THIS is an amazingly clever approach to the "bad hair" contest. It can be interpreted so many ways, Harry. Deep, profound and meaningful to me. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/19/2011 10:33:00 AM

Hello Harry, Very creative indeed Sir! Good luck in the contest. I like this one bunches As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2011 5:21:00 AM

Original and authentically creative my friend Harry .. impressive write for the contest and a top ten winner in my opinion.. but then I think all your poetry is top ten luv..