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Just a Thought 1

Raking, through the ashes
Shivers rolling up my spine,
Knowing, some similar day
These embers will be mine.

© Harry J Horsman  2011

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Andrea Dietrich

October 13, 2012 at 12:52 AM

rereading this one and still loving it. sad as it is!

Debbie Guzzi

January 27, 2011 at 6:48 AM

yikers what part is about hair or funny harry I just want to come HUG you too sad! Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

January 24, 2011 at 6:22 PM

a thought well written, enjoyed your write, nice form of write, enjoyed your entry good luck on the contest,..p.d.

Wilma Neels

January 20, 2011 at 5:29 AM

Just a thought you say Harry? You say so much here, I absolutely love it.. All the best for Rick's contest ;) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

January 19, 2011 at 2:29 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Not sure exactly the intented interpertation...Good luck in the contest..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

January 19, 2011 at 1:04 PM

Now THIS is an amazingly clever approach to the "bad hair" contest. It can be interpreted so many ways, Harry. Deep, profound and meaningful to me. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel

January 19, 2011 at 10:33 AM

Hello Harry, Very creative indeed Sir! Good luck in the contest. I like this one bunches As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 19, 2011 at 5:21 AM

Original and authentically creative my friend Harry .. impressive write for the contest and a top ten winner in my opinion.. but then I think all your poetry is top ten luv..