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Just a Thought 1

Raking, through the ashes Shivers rolling up my spine, Knowing, some similar day These embers will be mine. © Harry J Horsman 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/13/2012 12:52:00 AM
rereading this one and still loving it. sad as it is!
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Date: 1/27/2011 6:48:00 AM
yikers what part is about hair or funny harry I just want to come HUG you too sad! Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:22:00 PM
a thought well written, enjoyed your write, nice form of write, enjoyed your entry good luck on the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/20/2011 5:29:00 AM
Just a thought you say Harry? You say so much here, I absolutely love it.. All the best for Rick's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Not sure exactly the intented interpertation...Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 1/19/2011 1:04:00 PM
Now THIS is an amazingly clever approach to the "bad hair" contest. It can be interpreted so many ways, Harry. Deep, profound and meaningful to me. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 10:33:00 AM
Hello Harry, Very creative indeed Sir! Good luck in the contest. I like this one bunches As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/19/2011 5:21:00 AM
Original and authentically creative my friend Harry .. impressive write for the contest and a top ten winner in my opinion.. but then I think all your poetry is top ten luv..
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Date: 1/19/2011 3:00:00 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest i enjoyed the theme of your write, harry
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:28:00 PM
i'm not worried at all. i shaved my hair today. good luck in the contest. john
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:21:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:15:00 PM
ohhh, an unusual, bright take of the theme, harry... a winning pieve for me! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:11:00 PM
Yes, this is deep, as andrew commented below me. I really like it, Harry.
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:10:00 PM
Hello! Harry, that thought says it all. good luck in the contest~skat
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:08:00 PM
deep
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