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Just a Slab

You might look at me with your blushed pink face Your hard pimpled complexion But above it all I know that your sharp edged square attitude is all a bluff For/Four cornered we can all see that you really are two faced so double the math still just a slab standing the test of time waiting to be cracked through age when your crevices may be filled smoothed over to tidy your appearance and make seem renewed a little younger cosmetically by the touch of skilled hands steady in their chosen profession Yet at the end of the day everyone knows you are just going to get walked over

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/16/2010 9:19:00 AM
enjoyed reading today...deep poem can go many ways.
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Date: 9/16/2010 6:05:00 AM
Very descriptive write that fits many..Sad but we all have some of those cracks that have been smoothed over but not really fixed..Enjoyed reading of your work..I was gladdened at the comments that you left on my write about the spider compared to the abusive person..You go ahead and do your write on the same topic for yours will be unique totally different from my thoughts penned..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2010 5:48:00 AM
Oh, this is brilliant, Anna-Marie!! People who try to hide their age and behave in deceptive manners will eventually be exposed and "get walked over." Outstanding poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2010 12:24:00 AM
This is quite different, Anna. Who might this be? Well, gosh, long time no see. Let me check out one more and then I have GOT to get to sleep!!!
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