Just a Point

cats sit in silence
happy in their company
darling please shut up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:14 AM
A cat poem - oh, oh - there are times when this would work with my man, son and Mama! I'm remembering not to forget this one. Most excellent, Viv-man ... CayCay
Wigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:35 AM
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Smith Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 1:18 AM
They never care if the seat is up or down either...
Inman Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 11:59 AM
The quintessential Senryu. It's got it all, humor, perfect "volta," sarcasm and an angry wife. What more could you ask for.
Vaso Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 11:28 PM
LOL Oh my god, I just spilled me drink reading this!!! Hilarious!!!!
Y. Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Lol! Another funny write. That I enjoyed very much:')Alexis
Callus Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Cute and funny...I like it, Viv:) Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 6:07 AM
Ha ha, cute!
Wigley Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 6:22 AM
..and true, Richard, sadly. Gotta go- here she comes! Viv
Madonsela Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 5:54 AM
lol.. Really cracks up . Love it. :) *Ron*
Wigley Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 6:23 AM
Thanks Ronny, appreciate yourvisit. Regards, Viv
Leiser Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Ah, very funny, but sweet at the same time...clever, Viv :)
Wigley Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:48 PM
Thanks, Laura. I often sit and watch my kit, sitting a few feet away from a neighbour's moggie, for hours on end, quite content to say nothing. Communicating isn't all it's cracked up to be.. Viv x
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 8:54 AM
- Aww ..... bit of a lady ........ :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:49 PM
She's not quite how I painted her, Anne-Lise, but I know of one poor man who can't get a word in edgeways. Viv x
Kent Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Well with all that screaming you'll see the pan coming.
Wigley Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:50 PM
That makes the silences even scarier, ROnald. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 7:33 AM
ha ha ha.. careful she may scratch your eyes out lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Fear not, Jan, she never reads my stuff. Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 1:59 AM
You always make me laugh Viv...no matter how large or small the poem. I loved this. It has a terrific aha moment about it! ; ) 7
Wigley Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:51 PM
On trips to the seaside, I do envy those old age pensioners, sitting in bus stops with an ice cream not saying anything , Viv x
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