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Just a Phantom

Just a Phantom I go through this life, without direction. I don't feel sorrow, I don't feel pain and I don't feel love. I once had a love that was my life and my everything. He/She was my adoration. But greater was my torment - when one day He/she left and abandon me. I am a phantom of my past. I am one of those souls that God forgot. If one day I would meet Him/Her again and on his/Her knees would ask my forgiveness - I would forgive Him/Her for He/She would be just like anyone else to me. I am just a phantom of my past. I don't feel sorrow, I don't feel pain and I don't feel love...
01/21/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/2/2014 7:46:00 AM
I agree with my lovely friend Anne and same words I do say for you. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 1/28/2014 11:41:00 AM
- You are not forgotten - you are loved and I send you a big warm hug. - Beautifully written with sad feelings Lucilla. - All the best to you!! - Have a enjoyable day .... it is "soon" spring time!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) <3 <3 <3
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Date: 1/27/2014 5:06:00 PM
a brooding write immersed in gloom yet beautifully addressed.. hope this is not real, lucy... huggs
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:34:00 AM
The thing about love is that we are often loved without being aware of it. It does not mean we are any less loved. I hope God helps you feel an outpouring of love that overwhelms your heart so that you no longer feel like a phantom. If you are experiencing depression I encourage you to seek help. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/25/2014 4:12:00 AM
Him/Her pick one.
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Date: 1/24/2014 6:28:00 PM
Depressing, but an overall impressive write.
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Date: 1/23/2014 2:58:00 PM
Great work that I am reading today..I am glad that I found this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara..Not a phantom but real..
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Date: 1/22/2014 6:00:00 PM
Buen dia Lucilla, I think we all feel this way sometimes..Awesome write! Ken
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Date: 1/22/2014 5:51:00 PM
Exceedingly sad....Brilliantly written! My best, chuck
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Date: 1/21/2014 10:17:00 PM
This is a powerful write my friend! Your words touch me in a sad way, you have effectively made me feel exactly what you were trying to make me feel! This is an outstanding poem, I loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:37:00 PM
I agree with Vie. this is so sad, Lucilla. And I would hope you are not writing as if this were really you, dear lady!!
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