Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

Just a Phantom

Just a Phantom

I go through this life, without direction.
I don't feel sorrow, I don't feel pain and
I don't feel love.

I once had a love that was my life and my
everything. He/She was my adoration. But
greater was my torment - when one day
He/she left and abandon me.

I am a phantom of my past. I am one of
those souls that God forgot. If one day I
would meet Him/Her again and on his/Her
knees would ask my forgiveness - I would 
forgive Him/Her for He/She would be just like
anyone else to me.

I am just a phantom of my past. I don't feel
sorrow, I don't feel pain and I don't feel love... 

01/21/2014
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Bl Devnath February 2, 2014 at 7:46 AM I agree with my lovely friend Anne and same words I do say for you. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2014 at 11:41 AM - You are not forgotten - you are loved and I send you a big warm hug. - Beautifully written with sad feelings Lucilla. - All the best to you!! - Have a enjoyable day .... it is "soon" spring time!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) <3 <3 <3

Nette Onclaud January 27, 2014 at 5:06 PM a brooding write immersed in gloom yet beautifully addressed.. hope this is not real, lucy... huggs

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2014 at 8:34 AM The thing about love is that we are often loved without being aware of it. It does not mean we are any less loved. I hope God helps you feel an outpouring of love that overwhelms your heart so that you no longer feel like a phantom. If you are experiencing depression I encourage you to seek help. Hugs Rick.

The Situation January 25, 2014 at 4:12 AM Him/Her pick one.

Robert Pettit January 24, 2014 at 6:28 PM Depressing, but an overall impressive write.

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2014 at 2:58 PM Great work that I am reading today..I am glad that I found this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara..Not a phantom but real..

Ken Carroll January 22, 2014 at 6:00 PM Buen dia Lucilla, I think we all feel this way sometimes..Awesome write! Ken

Chuck Melugin January 22, 2014 at 5:51 PM Exceedingly sad....Brilliantly written! My best, chuck

Russell Sivey January 21, 2014 at 10:17 PM This is a powerful write my friend! Your words touch me in a sad way, you have effectively made me feel exactly what you were trying to make me feel! This is an outstanding poem, I loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2014 at 7:37 PM I agree with Vie. this is so sad, Lucilla. And I would hope you are not writing as if this were really you, dear lady!!