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The incredible value of insect-eating birds | Birds, Eating ...

JUST A MOMENT Happy grasshopper flapping four translucent wings hopping on grass blooms. Wild weeds and feral grasses on thorny field welcomed fly. Tiny grassy buds and flowers erected heads. Frolic grasshopper freely flying touching grass blades. It chose top of grass to sit. Oh! Just a moment! A flying bird appeared swift, catching grasshopper, on strong bite with its sharp beak and sat on branch of a tree.. 07/27/20 'just A Moment' Contest by John Lawless

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Date: 7/28/2020 4:58:00 PM
a moment for them is so horrible!! Would hate to be an insect. Their entire lives are but moments!!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/28/2020 9:11:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for visit n appreciation
Date: 7/27/2020 11:14:00 PM
Wonderful thought.. And in Tanka form the story looks great.. Good luck Anisha..
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Date: 7/28/2020 4:47:00 AM
Thanks Jenish. Love

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