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Just a Minute Too Late

Thrilled me—filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before —Edgar Allen Poe, The Raven Just a Minute Too Late Those inky shadows, follow me, cleverly devised in the corners of my inhabitation, without an invitation. They invest their horrorfest, sinking into the midnight hour, draining the color, blinding the truth, bespeaking of consequences of staying up just a minute too late. Is it too late to make a run for it or will the wall to wall rug, be pulled out from under, revealing the form of something alien, one which my mind can’t fathom, a phantom, miasmic apparition, a trick, a trap, a rapparee of Poe? A human silhouette, a living doll, a dark screen, abominable creaks and “hoo”s, flickering bulbs, a hidden troll… More light, bright enough to raise the dead, until the catacomb-storm deadens the source where you stand, or sit…don’t blink… you’ve fallen asleep…again and again waking up with a start, then to a voice from an unrecognizable throat, perhaps, the house speaks all by itself. Silly me, I wake up. The rug’s been rolled back in place. Only birds tweet, but nonetheless that relentless silhouette’s still on the wall, playing it straight…deceptively so.

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Date: 5/27/2024 5:51:00 PM
I had read this some days ago, but didn't have time to comment. An amazing work, Kim...filled ME with thrills... <3 !
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:27:00 AM
Dear Kim, What a captivating journey into the realm of darkness and uncertainty. I am a huge EAP fan! Your amazing use of poetic language creates an atmosphere filled with suspense and intrigue. The references to Poe add an extra layer of depth to the narrative. Thank you for sharing this mesmerizing piece—it left me with chills down my spine. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 8:14:00 AM
I’m delighted that you were intrigued, chilled down the spine, enjoyed the Poe reference. I appreciate you, Daniel? Blessing ~ Kim
Date: 5/23/2024 6:46:00 PM
Kim, the reference to Edgar Allan Poe is wonderful. Realizing that it was too late to sleep was a pleasant experience. Realize the essential nature of this poetry. Incisive and stirring.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/23/2024 6:07:00 PM
Poem strikes fear. I like the reference to Poe. I enjoyed the slow crawl to realizing sleep is too late to obtain.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 6:52:00 PM
Love that “slow crawl” Thank you!
Date: 5/23/2024 4:07:00 PM
an eerie and thrilling poem that gave me pause to contemplate that surrealistic realm of sleep when things bizarre jump from my subconscious into my brain. Yours came across as real right to the very end. Well done...enjoy your evening, hugs Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 4:43:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! We all have these midnight moments of disconcert. Have a lovely evening, sweet one!
Date: 5/23/2024 12:03:00 PM
Your thought-provoking words want me to lift the thin, yet imperturbable veil between dreams, waking life, and the person I've been told I am. Perhaps so much of our unease and macabre dread reflect this fear of the unknown--our true selves. Until then, we must face many a midnight dreary! Loved it! Should be a win. Robert
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 3:42:00 PM
I am glad you were able to delve between the midnight and waking hour. Thanks, Robert!
Date: 5/23/2024 10:37:00 AM
"will the wall to wall rug, be pulled out from under, revealing the form of something alien, one which my mind can’t fathom," -- our own unrecognizable depths, our deepest alien forever unknown. "Silly me, I wake up. The rug’s been rolled back in place. Only birds tweet, but nonetheless that relentless silhouette’s still on the wall," -- Our sleep and waking moments, often crossover, confound the other -- not so certain they are not viably interchangeable -- Very spooky! Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 10:52:00 AM
We all have those spooky midnight moments! Hugs
Date: 5/23/2024 10:05:00 AM
Oh wow... love the profound nature of this poem... Its one I would write ... Deep and emotive... One of your best poems recently..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 10:17:00 AM
You honor me by saying my poem is deep and emotive, like you would write…thank you so much! I am quite an admirer of you as a poet!

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