Just a Minute Too Late

Thrilled me—filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before
—Edgar Allen Poe, The Raven

Just a Minute Too Late

Those inky shadows, follow me,
cleverly devised in the corners
of my inhabitation, without
an invitation. They invest their
horrorfest, sinking into the midnight
hour, draining the color, blinding
the truth, bespeaking of consequences
of staying up just a minute too late.

Is it too late to make a run for it
or will the wall to wall rug,
be pulled out from under, revealing
the form of something alien,
one which my mind can’t fathom,
a phantom, miasmic apparition,
a trick, a trap, a rapparee of Poe?
A human silhouette, a living doll, a dark screen,
abominable creaks and “hoo”s, flickering
bulbs, a hidden troll…

More light, bright enough
to raise the dead, until
the catacomb-storm deadens the source
where you stand, or sit…don’t blink…
you’ve fallen asleep…again and again
waking up with a start,
then to a voice from an unrecognizable throat,
perhaps, the house speaks all by itself.

Silly me, I wake up. The rug’s been rolled back
in place. Only birds tweet, but nonetheless
that relentless silhouette’s still on the wall,
playing it straight…deceptively so.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:51 PM
I had read this some days ago, but didn't have time to comment. An amazing work, Kim...filled ME with thrills... <3 !
Rodgers Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Dear Kim, What a captivating journey into the realm of darkness and uncertainty. I am a huge EAP fan! Your amazing use of poetic language creates an atmosphere filled with suspense and intrigue. The references to Poe add an extra layer of depth to the narrative. Thank you for sharing this mesmerizing piece—it left me with chills down my spine. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 8:14 AM
I’m delighted that you were intrigued, chilled down the spine, enjoyed the Poe reference. I appreciate you, Daniel? Blessing ~ Kim
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Kim, the reference to Edgar Allan Poe is wonderful. Realizing that it was too late to sleep was a pleasant experience. Realize the essential nature of this poetry. Incisive and stirring.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Greenhough Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:07 PM
Poem strikes fear. I like the reference to Poe. I enjoyed the slow crawl to realizing sleep is too late to obtain.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Love that “slow crawl” Thank you!
Gorelick Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:03 PM
Your thought-provoking words want me to lift the thin, yet imperturbable veil between dreams, waking life, and the person I've been told I am. Perhaps so much of our unease and macabre dread reflect this fear of the unknown--our true selves. Until then, we must face many a midnight dreary! Loved it! Should be a win. Robert
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 3:42 PM
I am glad you were able to delve between the midnight and waking hour. Thanks, Robert!
DiMino Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:37 AM
"will the wall to wall rug, be pulled out from under, revealing the form of something alien, one which my mind can’t fathom," -- our own unrecognizable depths, our deepest alien forever unknown. "Silly me, I wake up. The rug’s been rolled back in place. Only birds tweet, but nonetheless that relentless silhouette’s still on the wall," -- Our sleep and waking moments, often crossover, confound the other -- not so certain they are not viably interchangeable -- Very spooky! Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:52 AM
We all have those spooky midnight moments! Hugs
One Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Oh wow... love the profound nature of this poem... Its one I would write ... Deep and emotive... One of your best poems recently..
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:17 AM
You honor me by saying my poem is deep and emotive, like you would write…thank you so much! I am quite an admirer of you as a poet!
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