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Just a Lonely One

I'm just a lonely one In a faceless crowd Just a lonely cloud In a summer sky Just a lonely guy In a classic car Just a lonely star On a cloudy night Just a lonely light In a deserted street Just a lonely beat On a jungle drum Just a lonely hum Of a distant band Just a lonely hand On a pistol trigger Just a lonely figure Under a foaming sea Just a lonely me

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Date: 4/7/2018 3:44:00 PM
It s really nice but sad written poem, well we should learn to live alone cause nobody's gonna stay in our lives forever, even in our graves we are gonna go alone, so we should learn to stay alone, plus don t worry anybody will come to your life, who s totally gonna change it, in every person s life suchan angel came, just have patience and trust in God, good luck
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Mubarika Sami
Date: 4/7/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Faraz! I really appreciate your comments and wait patiently for my angel :))

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