Just a Little Word

It was a tiny thing
Just a little word
Made up of little letters
That you planted in my heart
You didn’t think much of it
You patted it down
And covered it with love

It wasn’t much
Just a little word
Little letters
Laced with encouragement
Dipped in love
Buried
In my heart
Watered by my tears
Warmed by the sunlight of your care
Growing

G   r   o  w  i   n  g

Strong and beautiful
A word tree
Bursting into bloom
Breathtakingly Beautiful Blossoms
Flowers that never shrivel
Or fall
Or get blighted by the frost of criticism
Eternally growing
In the garden of my heart

I weep tears of joy
Exuberant joy
You planted
A little word seed 

Not knowing
My heart is fertile
            My heart is rich
                        My tears plentiful
Not knowing
You’d left me
An eternal gift
Of wonder and beauty


“But," you say, “It just was a word!" 

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                                                    Eileen  Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/4/2014 9:16:00 PM
this is so adorable and I love how you formed the flower that bloomed from that word seed. your free verse style is sweet and beautiful, Eileen. You wear your emotions on your sleeve and people really respond to that.
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Date: 5/1/2014 2:38:00 PM
What a blessing! This is such an enjoyable, beautifully written and captivating read. Thank you so much for the share. You are indeed hugely talented
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Date: 4/12/2014 1:41:00 AM
Eileen, the title grabbed me, and I'm glad it did. What a cool poem. So descriptive and real. You're beautiful; a talented wordsmith and imagist. Keep it up, girl. hugs xo mel :)
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:56:00 AM
As always Eileen; You have created a beautiful poem. In the garden of my heart. U. R. Good... Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 1:06:00 PM
I love to be in the garden of your heart Lucilla! :) Hugs
Date: 3/21/2014 1:20:00 PM
Your mom sounded like such a beautiful & amazing woman. I think that when we lose people we love, the hollowness that they take with them, is always there, but yes, the memories we have of them keep them alive-- you're so right, they are there in our hearts. Thank you so much again! I'm smiling right now, in his memory.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/21/2014 1:33:00 PM
hello, sweetie....Thanks for stopping by and sharing your heart. We are all walking wounded.....but...we must keep walking in their honor. Hugs
Date: 3/21/2014 1:18:00 PM
Awww shucks, I really "dig" the metaphor that you used here, Eileen! Isn't it amazing indeed when what others seem to be negligible, could mean the world to another? Grow into so much more for them? I love the metaphor you used here, and I am a Huge sucker for formatting in poems, I really enjoyed this one, Eileen! Very creative write! Thanks so much for all your encouraging words- it really touches me, what you say. I'm so sorry about you losing your mom, I can only imagine how hard it is.contd
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Date: 3/21/2014 8:33:00 AM
I haven't figured out how to do formatting, it doesn't seem to work with my iPad .
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Date: 3/20/2014 12:33:00 PM
your poem is beautiful Love ~SKAT~
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/20/2014 8:51:00 PM
Thanks, Skitty Skat! :) So sweet of you to visit! Will be around to see you soon! It's 4:00 am. I'm beat. Hugs
Date: 3/20/2014 9:41:00 AM
This is so cool! Perfect!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/20/2014 8:52:00 PM
I have my smiling, Richard. Thanks ever so much. Glad you liked it.
Date: 3/19/2014 8:51:00 PM
How lovely this is Eileen. Words of encouragement are golden and inspire, especially poets, to want to create. One of your best creations!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/20/2014 8:54:00 PM
Yes, Connie. My love language is touch and words of affirmation. Have you read the book, "Love's Languages"? There are five. These two are mine. Yes, words really touch my heart. Thanks for stopping by. BTW...I've made mention of you and your form in my latest blog, if you can to visit. Hugs
Date: 3/19/2014 5:12:00 PM
beautiful! the flower at the end is sweet, but the poem is strong enough that you didn't even need it. i really enjoyed this one very much, eileen...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/20/2014 8:55:00 PM
Oh...that is a tender and sweet post, Ilene. I'm ever so grateful. Hugs!
Date: 3/19/2014 5:02:00 PM
I did enjoy this piece.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/20/2014 8:55:00 PM
Glad to know it. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 3/19/2014 3:15:00 PM
- Admiring your art, Eileen - Unique - Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/20/2014 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine! Will do my best! So glad it's the weekend. Thanks for the lovely visit. Hugs
Date: 3/19/2014 3:09:00 PM
Wow !!! Eileen you out did yourself.. This is a piece of art. A favorite..I am blown away.....Hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/19/2014 3:12:00 PM
:) Thanks ever so much, Tim. I'm so so glad that you liked it! A piece of art? What could be sweeter! Thanks!
Date: 3/19/2014 2:51:00 PM
Hi Eileen; just a tiny kittle word! ... but it's the base on which this whole poem stands...and flourishes. A lovely poem in all its simplicity. /x/ paul
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Date: 3/19/2014 3:11:00 PM
:) Thank you, Paul. I've been thinking of encouragers and what a big impact they leave on our lives. Some people, like Barnabas of the Bible, are SONS (and daughters) of encouragement. What a joy to be around these people. Little do they know...their words...bring such joy! Thank you for visiting, Paul. :) Blessings
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