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Just A Little Sip (Haiku)

The golden moth lights upon clustered white blossoms; sipping sweet nectar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/19/2008 5:58:00 PM
Beautiful imagery paints a picture with words in this one. Nice use of this short format. Good job! Karen
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:52:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Adell - God bless you my dear supportive friend
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Date: 9/11/2008 6:02:00 PM
beautiful and sweet write and thank you for your welcome comments, D-nyce
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Date: 9/10/2008 2:01:00 PM
Petty picture. Nature is awesome. Lovely haiku. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/10/2008 7:51:00 AM
Adell , you're on a Haiku roll here.... Slainte ...
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