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Just a Little Bit of Sugar

JUST A LITTLE BIT OF SUGAR His teeth smile that kind of grin, begging eyes, impish with red hair, and mouth open wide. He begs for a cookie – chocolate chip. Craving just a little bit, of sugar. Oh! How his eyes twinkle, with just one bite. Then in toddler style, he shoves it in. He’s off to his next stop, sweet-energized. Craving just a little bit of sugar. Whirring planes, zooming cars, building blocks, tire a pint-size boy out. Looks for his pillow – Grandma’s shoulder. She kisses his forehead – craving...just a little bit of sugar. 2/21/2017

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Date: 3/8/2017 8:52:00 AM
Simple and lovely!Congrats Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2017 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 2/27/2017 1:39:00 AM
This is a great poem. Congratulations, Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 7:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kai! :)
Date: 2/26/2017 4:15:00 PM
Touching and poignant - nicely done - congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 2/26/2017 12:58:00 PM
How cute Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thank you, James!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thank you, James!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thank you, James!
Date: 2/21/2017 10:03:00 AM
This was perfect Kim, so creative and wonderfully written. This one makes me smile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! I'm watching my little buddy today. Love him!
Date: 2/21/2017 7:57:00 AM
Heartwarming poem about a toddler wanting a little sugar hug from his Grandma Kim! G/L in the contest~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl :)

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