JUST A GUY WITH THE BLUES

[Verse 1]
Hello, sweet brown-eyed girl
I'm just a guy with the midnight blues
Tryin’ to play it cool, but truth be told
I'm already lost in you

You gave the softest little smile
And I was halfway ‘cross the floor
Had a line in mind, a drink and some time
Maybe walk you out that door

[Chorus]
But girl, you lit up like the sun
Hit me with a look I couldn’t outrun
All my life, I’ve dreamed of this
Was countin’ down to our first kiss… tonight

[Verse 2]
That’s when he walked on by
With that easy charm and confident stride
You turned to him like a song you knew
And I felt the light leave the room

[Chorus 2]
Yeah, those sweet brown eyes
Never even caught these blues
It was just a dream, just a dance in my mind
A love I never got to lose

You smiled like I wasn’t even there
Guess hearts don’t always get to choose
So I’ll be walkin’ home alone tonight
Just a guy with the blues

[Bridge]
Maybe in another life
You’d look up and I’d be right
But fate’s a quiet kind of thief
And hope don’t always stay the night

[Final Chorus]
Now those brown eyes shine for someone new
And I fade back into the view
It’s me and this neon sky
Singin’ truths I can’t deny

Yeah, I’m just a guy with the blues
Still crazy… behind these blues

[Outro]
Just a guy...
With the blues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Brewer Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 2:04 AM
Heyyy, I really like this one, such a true observation on every day life and so well pieced together with your lyrical words. Xx ( please check out my poem, Wonderful Man) fabulous stuff.. Jenny.x
Paul Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Lyric Man, these days things are so much harder. Loyalty is something you never find and you mainly see girls getting theirs hearts broken by guys but what we don't see are the guys getting their hearts broken by girls and ti know that there are still guys out there who love a girl to pieces and is willing to do anything for them. Well that's extraordinary.
Ellison Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Can be a real bummer... have actually done it!!! RED FACED!!! LOL
Nairne Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:23 AM
I like this one...I can see this being a scene in a movie..a good read
Beam Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 6:07 AM
Nice play on the blues and yeah. The funny thing is you get embarrassed but you are probably the only one that noticed. Rejection is awful real or imaginary.
O'Haolin Whalen Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Nicely penned Lyric man. It makes one try to compose music to fit it. I think most good poetry is lyrics that have no melody (yet)
Smith Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Know the felling Lyric Man, guess we all do. Great work my friend. Best work for a lyricist, is to remind us of how much we truly are just alike. You have a great talent for that...
Wheatley Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Aww, you won't be alone for long,
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Cool situational romanticism, Lyric Man. Misty lyrical be this sweet coin beat ... when the meet-a-maid toll leaves your heart empty. I feel the blues vibe on this mighty fine lyric poem. Love and more love always.
Dillenbeck Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Do you compose music for your lyrics? If so, do you perform your pieces?
Lee Sr. Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:44 AM
This would be an ouch moment especially for a nerd or someone of low esteem.. Brilliant write could be coutry or blues Love it... James
Behm Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:39 AM
I can almost hear this put to music. You put me right in the room with you. Great work! Kurt
Sergi Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:17 AM
I'd rather be an old house with a romantic character than a Casa Nova! Great Write, Lyric!
Sergi Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:17 AM
I'd rather be an old house with a romantic character than a Casa Nova! Great Write, Lyric!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:22 AM
I love this! We all have those awkward moments.
Raynes Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Ha yep, that's happened to me a few times down at the local, nice writing
May Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Having the blues for a brown eyed girl :) ..I enjoyed this write LM..
Curtis Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:51 AM
This has happen to everybody at least once, I'm sure. Since I got married I haven't had the problem---I simply don't wave back---lol Great lyrics I wish I could hear the tune
Pandit Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:13 AM
It was all going well, till the other guy showed up. You captured the moments well that many have experienced..and the embarrassing disappointment. Great song, LM.
Lindley Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:06 AM
A very captivating theme, superbly composed my friend. And yes, that has happened to me as well, in my youth. That beautiful girl, her pretty eyes and bright smile, stayed in my mind for many months.... A fav..
Trifiatis Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 5:52 AM
Superbly written my friend, L.M. Much enjoyed!
Marcella Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:57 AM
A wonderful poem!
Docherty Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Beautifully captured, glad to see you here too!
Allison Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:34 AM
your poet's note sure made me smile LM, I think its something many have experienced. Another fab lyric my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:09 PM
For sure...makes you want to shrink
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