Just a Ghost

i walk this earth,just a 
ghost                                                                                                                              
 no family,no friends,just a 
ghost                                                                                                                              
 no home,no car,just a 
ghost                                                                                                                              
 no love,only a broken heart,just a 
ghost                                                                                                                              
 on my knees,praying to god,send me something to let me know i do exist,just one person to 
touch my life,instead of being just a 
ghost                                                                                                                              
 he answered me,sending a true heart to love me just for 
me                                                                                                                                  
 a woman who knows i have nothing,and loves me 
unconditionally                                                                                                                 
 someone who lifts me up ,everytime i get 
down                                                                                                                               
 gives me confidence and faith,constantly tells me not to 
frown                                                                                                                              
 i thank god everynight now,for me no longer,,,,,being a ghost
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Gilly Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 10:03 PM
Thankyou(: youres is very beutiful as well(:
Spence Sr Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:28 PM
I like the refrain in this poem. Give thanks and praise as always. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
Gilly Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Nice popem(: i liked it it felt really deep to me. Care to read mine?
Peterson Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:23 AM
well writen i love this poem good luck and welcome to poetry soup
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 7:31 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup David. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 9:41 PM
I dont believe in ghosts..Im certain a ghost didnt write this awesome piece. well done.BG
Sweetheart Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 8:12 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family.. enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Quintero Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 4:22 PM
That's right no longer a ghost...a ghost couldn't write this wonderful poem.
Reed Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 4:20 PM
Awesome
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