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Just a Friend Virus

take care against this wicked infection a cracked window loses love protection innocent texting becomes a front door ugly lies collect into a deceit store my ignorance assimilates naive your every breath as easy as deceive our marriage day memories now bleed out virtue meets a time of our love blackout a doorbell rings my disillusionment making “just a friend” an illusionist my trust is destroyed in a simple text I end up very confused and perplexed today I found him in my own front door making my unfaithful wife a cheap whore -07-02-17-

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Date: 2/16/2017 5:42:00 PM
WOW!! Well done James!!;) Congratulations on your win!!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Just James
Date: 2/19/2017 10:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Deborah!
Date: 2/14/2017 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations James, very well deserved...
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Date: 2/14/2017 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Charlie!
Date: 2/14/2017 5:32:00 AM
So many great descriptions! "D&$@ that texting! Let the slam of a door find him reeling! Congrats on your top win, JJ
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Date: 2/14/2017 11:14:00 PM
Thank you Kim...ill introduce my door to his face!!:)
Date: 2/14/2017 1:59:00 AM
Angry and passionate. Congratulations, Kai
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Just James
Date: 2/14/2017 11:14:00 PM
Thank you Kai
Date: 2/13/2017 4:52:00 PM
I could feel you seething throughout this. Loved the rhyme scheme and word choices, they all added to the general tone. Don't listen to Judy, though, I say punch him
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Date: 2/14/2017 11:18:00 PM
Yes yes ...thats what men do to explain nicley
Date: 2/7/2017 5:32:00 PM
WoW Hope that didn't really happen. The anger here is palpable. Well done. Very descriptive and lots of emotion. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB ps Don't bruise your knuckles on a man like that. He'll get his and he probably won't be able to cure it either.
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Date: 2/7/2017 10:36:00 PM
Best close that window!!...Thanks my friend for stopping by and kind words my friend.
Date: 2/7/2017 12:40:00 AM
I really hope this is fiction, James! Nonetheless, it is a beauty of a sonnet my friend!
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Just James
Date: 2/7/2017 10:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words WW

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