Just Too Late

JUST    TOO    LATE

Five  past five
Sign across the glass door states “Closed”.

At the adjacent store I had just left,
There were no more spools of whipcord
For the grass trimmer
Which I had bought too late in the season.
The grass was vigorous and green but seeded only 
Three weeks earlier, in mid September.

Couldn’t seed it earlier 
As the ground had to be re-soiled 
After the construction of the freshly-roofed house. 
Roof and walls of the house were 
Only put in place in February, after a difficult winter.

Even though the house was started last year,
There had been delays with paperwork 
For gas, electricity and water:
We should have started the paperwork two years  earlier,
But were distracted by illness 
And the need to buy an apartment in the city 
As a fall-back investment
To cope with any unforeseen expenses with the house.

We bought  the apartment following the starting 
At a new job in this city, 
After me quitting the previous job and moving house,
In order to be together  at long last  -
After our two legal separations were settled
Allowing us to marry. 

That followed both our retirements 
From long careers as professionals 
And started us in this part-time worklife of teaching,
So completely different  from the past:
Twenty five years in one office  
Or fifteen years in some other production process. 

Ten past five now, and I decide to  come back 
To the adjacent store tomorrow   
And check to see if he has any more whipcord. 
Got to get the grass cut  - late,   but
Before another  difficult winter. 

........................................................................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/17/2018 1:27:00 AM
Informative piece Sidney. Flows well. Like the way you stuck to subject and did not make poem too long. Easy to understand. Good paragraph division. Will read more to see how your talent is progressing. BEST REGARDS David in NZ
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Date: 9/17/2018 11:27:00 AM
David, Many thanks for your kind supportive comments......Like all my poems which I really like, this one seemed to write itself.....best wishes Syd
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