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Just... Just one night, that's all it took Just one glance, that one first look. Just so cute, long, golden curls Just lucky was I, you weren't swarmed by girls Just one chat; about soccer and school Just a few moments, I knew you were cool Just like that, it became so easy Just talking with you, refreshing and breezy Just your smile, warm and bright Just being around you felt kinda right Just laughing along at our stupid puns Just drinking together was so much fun Just when I thought, you weren't interested Just took my hand, and you compressed it Just that squeeze was such a feel Just holding you then felt surreal Just one smoke, okay, maybe two Just in the cupboard, I first kissed you Just after we finished, a tad bit high, Just had a feeling, it wasn't goodbye Just in the hall, in an embrace Just the look upon your face Just your charm, you've got a knack Just from your words: "hey, let's walk back" Just a thought, of that night we shared Just thinking back, I saw how you cared Just makes me want, to see how it'd be Just to try dating, trying you and me Just a thought, not to gush, Just going out, there'd be no rush Just casual as friends, I'll hope for more Just that much, I feel is good for my core Just rereading, all that I've said Just makes me dizzy- too many words for my head Just looking at this, understand this part: Just know that this all, came from my heart

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Date: 9/11/2010 8:36:00 PM
thanks everyone!! I've liked writing poetry for a while now, and kinda forgot about it until recently when I met this guy and a day after, just felt like writing about him! haha. So this is my first legitimate poem I suppose that I've ever shared with people, glad you all like it, that seriously makes me really glad =)
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Date: 9/11/2010 12:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... soup offers many contests on site.. check them out to enter and good luck ..with luv..
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Date: 9/11/2010 11:01:00 AM
this seems like it came from the heart and thats what make it so good
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Date: 9/10/2010 10:39:00 PM
Well this is just a awesome write, especially coming from the heart, enjoyed your write tonight Amy, best wishes this weekend..P.D.
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