Jurisdiction of the Eye

There is a potential so pure in your nature
that it be nexus between diviner and rapture
where freedom finds the fire of Prime Creator
deep in the brain's interior, a glandular mind expander
crossfertilizer of electrochemical ego and soul sorcerer, 
the pineal pinnacle,  receptor of solar miracle,  regulator of the nocturnal wanderer
it is the tip of your spinal staff, the lituus which levies the chakra current into hypermatter,
33 skeletal sigils bridge the neural signals from root to bloom in the theta theater
as an inner vision of ajna becomes an outter creation of prajna in an unfailing future
with liberty being the law of wherewithal in a world wanting war with the philosopher, 
passion becomes the parchment that your rights are riddled upon in cosmic character
unalienable imagination,  undeniable in purification of reason unleashing the lotus tiger
into landscapes of raw physics where starry scriptures are alive in the instincts of an originator -

J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/30/2016 6:06:00 AM
This is great and a well-thought-out one. Keep it up. A rate of 7. Thanks for the kind words in my humble poems, by the way. ;)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 6/10/2016 6:17:00 PM
Your poetry is untammed, and beautifully provocative Moon Flower..J.A.B.
Date: 5/7/2016 8:58:00 AM
Wow, so detailed, descriptive, and great. Starting with "there is a potential so pure..." begs the reader to keep reading because that is such a great thought and motivator. Even though such words like "ajna" and "pineal" are not used in everyday speech this write molds them in perfect harmony in your message. :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/7/2016 7:02:00 PM
Your observation of the opening line is precise, and beautiful in it's receptivity of this poem'smessage Casarah, that pleases me greatly! There is a wonderous harmony, not only in the threading and stiching of the concepts and metaphors, but also with the rhythm and rhyme that enables the language and spirit of this poem to stride along into the mind cogently, and elegantly. Ajna and Prajna are Sanskrit words for the inner eye and intuitive wisdom...J.A.B.
Date: 5/1/2016 1:33:00 AM
WOW!!! So stoked Poet Destroyer (Linda) put me onto your poetry. Your words resonate with that potential I have found within my being, the true nature of self that can be consciously enlightened when mindfully aware of that spark within us that can be ignited. wow wow wow!! blessed. Peace my friend, Quincy
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Date: 5/8/2016 5:22:00 AM
Thank you Linda. Stoked you put me onto Justin. Quincy
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/7/2016 7:05:00 PM
Your love for the craftsmanship, passion, and truth of poetry is so attractive to me Lindy...Justin
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Date: 5/7/2016 1:15:00 PM
Hi, Justin... I hope you don't mind I messaged Quincy, and answered his question, when he asked who I thought was one of the most skilled writers of this site, I told him you. As his poetry is written by every bit of his inner sense and brilliant. If you read one of his poems, you will see he's very skilled himself. Not many have this ability when showcasing words we never imagine using when writing a poem. Thank you..always Lindy
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/1/2016 6:41:00 PM
The relationship between mind and body is so total, so beautifully inseparable. The most intimate codependence imaginable until Death allows the spirit to fly free either by tragedy or maturity Quincy. Few people pay attention to the body's inexorable influence upon the mind, of course equilibrium attained through conscious interplay opens our potential very broadly. The body has so much to give the mind who's origin is extraneous to the flesh. Your kindness and excitement is uplifting...J.A.B.
Date: 4/7/2016 12:16:00 AM
Ah...this is exotic food for my soul to savor tonight, Justin...admittedly, this requires quite a lot of critical digesting on my part, but it is a rewarding piece all the same...this is what I get from it from the first read anyway – this delves deep between reason and imagination - how expansive our minds are when we process philosophies, ideas and wonders through a grander lens of awareness, with the gift of free-will and independence, and the vast potentials of our human thought processing. Your language throughout is both practical and in some sense mystical. (1)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/7/2016 6:29:00 PM
The source of true freedom is in the divine mind which works in concert with our physiology. You are correct Poetess, this composition exists in a beautiful balance of anatomical knowledge and metaphysical awareness, an equilibrium between freedom, intellect, and physical forces. Freedom is strength of mind Laura...J.A.B.
Date: 4/7/2016 12:16:00 AM
This is stirring a lot of things in me because these are newer concepts to me than I am used to. You carefully dissect the essentials that bring brilliant minds to the focal point of inspiration and original type of thinking. Of course this teaching piece is not all scientifically based, as there are spiritual pressure points you highlight as well, and though I know little of the terms referenced here, I see them pertaining to the enlightened and heightened soul and ego. Everything that makes us up, every bone, every cell, every nerve and tissue takes part in reaching this hyper-enlightened state. (2)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/7/2016 6:35:00 PM
Superbly stated my astute Poetess. The chakras are related to the endocrine system of the human body, known as glands, which definitely includes the heart...when these glands are working optimally with the spinal cord, nervous systems, the pineal gland is functioning at a heightened level subsequently the brain becomes supercharged and one's consciousness expands, becomes more dynamic...J.A.B.
Date: 4/7/2016 12:16:00 AM
What I feel is - inspiration is a powerful, powerful energy, and those that have a higher awareness and exposure to certain knowledges I think benefit from this energy even more so. But I do think it can also be quite draining if used extensively, and without clear purpose. Maybe I’m off course, but this piece has gotten me to think deeply anyway. ;) I love your cultured and philosophical mind, Justin. Perhaps you can educate me on some of the more underlying meanings. You are truly an amazing poet and philosopher, Justin. Impressive as usual! Always, Laura (3)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/7/2016 6:55:00 PM
Continued...I have received, nor pursued any classical training or teaching, my Kundahlini awakening began in earnest, naturally in my teens and over the past twenty years I have intuitively learned to utilize it's benefits instinctively, and with purpose, sometimes just to survive with grace in this world through the blessing of Providence. I'm sure Edgar Cayce would agree with your admonition. In some respects the activation of the 3rd Eye is a survival mechanism. Your perspective here is brilliant as expected Laura...J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/7/2016 6:47:00 PM
Precisely my lovely and wise Poetess...the Kundahlini, as this is known in Central Asia and in many other spiritual traditions throughout the East & West, is the awakening process of mind and body that we all, inevitably experience to one extent or another, however, the undisciplined, unfocused energy that ensues can either be retarded, "wasted", or even dangerous for anybody...J.A.B.
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