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You're akin to a blend of my favourite hues— not just black, but preserved, concealed, opaque, resilient, and profound. Yet, a gentle gaze reveals a swirling display of myriad colours. Not many can see it, but for you, I'd illuminate it all. It's not merely white; it's pristine, translucent, and unbarred only to your eyes. Each stain forms a pattern twirling in my mind. I'd freeze time repeatedly to have you here, regardless of our state. I'd rather you exist without my proximity than not exist at all. Have a wonderful day today knowing it's special and will always be. Happy birthday, vanilla, shine like the diamond you are.

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Date: 3/10/2024 11:14:00 PM
It is a wonderful tribute to someone you love. He/she/it is not an embodiment of all perfections, but a jumble of brilliance and darkness, an amalgam of defeats and resilience. "Yet, a gentle gaze reveals a swirling display of myriad colours. Not many can see it, but for you, I'd illuminate it all." You are a true friend. You are committed to what a genuine friend should do. Well written dear Tonye....
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Tonye George
Date: 3/11/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa, I loved how you spotted those out.
Date: 3/10/2024 11:01:00 AM
Is this birthday of a planet? So mysterious yet beautifully penned
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Tonye George
Date: 3/11/2024 6:44:00 AM
Hahaha, I wish it was. Thank you Andrea.
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:32:00 AM
Hahaha, I wish it was. Thank you Andrea.
Date: 3/6/2024 4:14:00 AM
Dear Tonye, Your words paint a portrait of complexity and beauty, much like the celestial bodies you describe. Your ability to capture the hidden depths beneath the surface is truly remarkable. I see this as a mosaic of emotions and experiences, each layer adding to the richness of your being. Your resilience shines through, even when life's challenges seem overwhelming. You have a gift for uncovering the beauty in the ordinary and celebrating the extraordinary. It has touched my heart in ways I cannot fully express. Keep shining bright, Tonye, for the world is a better place with your light in it. - Blessings, Daniel
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Tonye George
Date: 3/6/2024 4:33:00 AM
Thank you for these wonderful insights, Daniell, I appreciate it. Hope to see you again.
Date: 2/27/2024 5:10:00 PM
an elegant and eloquent poem. I especially liked these lines: Not many can see it, but for you, I'd illuminate it all. It's not merely white;
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Tonye George
Date: 2/27/2024 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Sara. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 2/27/2024 5:06:00 PM
Whoever Vanilla is will be proud to have this sweet tribute paid, an aura of beauty and elegance
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Tonye George
Date: 2/27/2024 6:59:00 PM
Yes, Tom. Thank you so much for your support.

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