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Jupiter Solaris

Written: May 12, 2024

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Setting resolve, crashing, 
onto desolate shores
glittering with rubies
In the depths of those eyes,
a gentle flicker-waltz
with a captivating voice, 
drawing me in as a pulling force-
love by the shore
amidst water embrace, 
Poseidon and Minerva 
gently converge
a trio of raindrops twirled around,
completing me
as I breathe in, I ponder... 
myriad reasons why.

Stay tethered, and 
hold an eye on me all night
your voice is a gentle breeze
whispering sweetly to my soul,
In its melodic embrace
I find solace and feel whole
Oh, Jupiter Tonans,
madness prevails
a touch of sobriety as we age
an untamed love ignites my soul.

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Valsa George May 14, 2024 at 2:43 AM "your voice is a gentle breeze whispering sweetly to my soul, In its melodic embrace I find solace and feel whole" How thoughts about a loved one are comforting and reviving. The love of Poseidon and Minerva stands as a parallel here to the love felt between the lovers here. This poem sends out a comforting breeze of love and romance, reviving the soul and emotions. "Untamed love' is a powerful usage. Wonderful poem in sweet tone and lovely diction.

Aurore Severo May 14, 2024 at 1:38 AM A wonderful poem :) xoxo

Duke Beaufort May 13, 2024 at 9:58 AM SP, this tells me you think it's great to be alive and to feel the magic of love. It's a wonderful piece. I'm reading it outside on my patio this afternoon in beautiful sunlight and feeling a huge inner smile from your words. We might as well enjoy every day while we can!!!!!

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 13, 2024 at 8:45 AM Dear Sotto, Your poem is echoing the tumultuous yet tender dance of life's waves crashing upon desolate shores. Just like Poseidon and Minerva converging, your words created for me a menagerie of emotions, completing the soul's wanting connection. I loved how in all your verses, I find peace, feeling tethered to a universal longing for love's sweet madness and the sobering touch of reality. Sotto, this is an exquisite reflection of the human experience. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Vijay Pandit May 13, 2024 at 6:47 AM In sync with the cosmic mystery, my friend. A blend of emotions journeying into the world above!