Jupiter Solaris

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Written: May 12, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Setting resolve, crashing, onto desolate shores glittering with rubies In the depths of those eyes, a gentle flicker-waltz with a captivating voice, drawing me in as a pulling force- love by the shore amidst water embrace, Poseidon and Minerva gently converge a trio of raindrops twirled around, completing me as I breathe in, I ponder... myriad reasons why. Stay tethered, and hold an eye on me all night your voice is a gentle breeze whispering sweetly to my soul, In its melodic embrace I find solace and feel whole Oh, Jupiter Tonans, madness prevails a touch of sobriety as we age an untamed love ignites my soul.

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Valsa George

Date: 5/14/2024 2:43:00 AM

"your voice is a gentle breeze whispering sweetly to my soul, In its melodic embrace I find solace and feel whole" How thoughts about a loved one are comforting and reviving. The love of Poseidon and Minerva stands as a parallel here to the love felt between the lovers here. This poem sends out a comforting breeze of love and romance, reviving the soul and emotions. "Untamed love' is a powerful usage. Wonderful poem in sweet tone and lovely diction.

Aurore Severo

Date: 5/14/2024 1:38:00 AM

A wonderful poem :) xoxo

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/13/2024 9:58:00 AM

SP, this tells me you think it's great to be alive and to feel the magic of love. It's a wonderful piece. I'm reading it outside on my patio this afternoon in beautiful sunlight and feeling a huge inner smile from your words. We might as well enjoy every day while we can!!!!!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/13/2024 8:45:00 AM

Dear Sotto, Your poem is echoing the tumultuous yet tender dance of life's waves crashing upon desolate shores. Just like Poseidon and Minerva converging, your words created for me a menagerie of emotions, completing the soul's wanting connection. I loved how in all your verses, I find peace, feeling tethered to a universal longing for love's sweet madness and the sobering touch of reality. Sotto, this is an exquisite reflection of the human experience. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2024 6:47:00 AM

In sync with the cosmic mystery, my friend. A blend of emotions journeying into the world above!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/13/2024 5:18:00 AM

wow, what an engaging poem, Sotto! I was drawn into the subtle 'love/romance' within your words with its references to Poseidon and Minerva. I especially liked: Stay tethered, and hold an eye on me all night your voice is a gentle breeze whispering sweetly to my soul, I enjoyed the soft passion that was woven into your well-crafted lines. Have a wonderful day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara