Chris Green Poet Free verse

Jupiter Findings

Jupiter Findings
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Here at the edge,
evening’s farewell drapes
a horizon’d neckline

crimson scarves
weave nature’s portals above
chilled coastal dreams

where weathered planks, 
saltwater worn, reach
in straight line destinations

from shore to sea
and back again,
silently as

reflections of
distant landscapes and 
yesterday longings

gather neath a
heart shaped halo
sent to find…you

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Carole Duet May 29, 2017 at 1:48 AM Beautiful and romantic... Chris Green May 29, 2017 at 8:18 AM Thanks Carole, I am happy you liked this one.

Janice Canerdy May 27, 2017 at 9:17 AM This is so beautiful--effective use of figurative language. Congrats on your win, Chris! Janice Chris Green May 29, 2017 at 8:18 AM Thank you so very much Janice.

Charmaine Chircop April 24, 2017 at 3:32 PM How sweet that Heart-Shaped Halo...I love how you did this poem. using short three line verses...Aww.lovely. Chris Green April 24, 2017 at 4:50 PM Thank you again my sweet friend. Always you leave a smile behind for me to find when you visit my poetry. :)

Lisa Ricci April 24, 2017 at 5:56 AM Good Morning Chris. So gentle and quiet. The voice and tone are so appealing to the eye and ear. (yes both) Your formatting and layout are marvelous and your words are beautiful. Here is a toast to Jupiter Findings. Well done completely. Have a wonderful morning. Chris Green April 24, 2017 at 8:39 AM Good morning Lisa. Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Joanna Daniel April 23, 2017 at 10:08 AM Touching words, Chris:) Chris Green April 24, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thank you so very much Jo.

Debbie Duncan April 23, 2017 at 1:34 AM Love this reflection of a poem :) Chris Green April 24, 2017 at 8:38 AM Thanks so very much Debbie. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 22, 2017 at 9:29 AM This poem is like a dream afloat with the moon, the tides, and an old boat still seeking like a bottle dropped in the sea with its message locked inside:) Amitiés Chris Green April 24, 2017 at 8:37 AM Thank you so very much Anne Marie. I appreciate your visit and kind words about my poem.

Agnes Krampe April 22, 2017 at 7:43 AM I enjoyed your imagery, Chris, nicely done. Chris Green April 24, 2017 at 8:37 AM Thank you so much Agnes

Darren White April 22, 2017 at 12:11 AM I see a painting here, Chris, sitting on the remains of a wreck, love it, especially those crimson scarves, can see them :) Chris Green April 24, 2017 at 8:37 AM Thanks so much Darren. It was actually written to a photograph a friend sent me.