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Jupiter Findings

Jupiter Findings ~ Here at the edge, evening’s farewell drapes a horizon’d neckline crimson scarves weave nature’s portals above chilled coastal dreams where weathered planks, saltwater worn, reach in straight line destinations from shore to sea and back again, silently as reflections of distant landscapes and yesterday longings gather neath a heart shaped halo sent to find…you

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Carole Duet

Date: 5/29/2017 1:48:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic...

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Carole, I am happy you liked this one.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/27/2017 9:17:00 AM

This is so beautiful--effective use of figurative language. Congrats on your win, Chris! Janice

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thank you so very much Janice.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/24/2017 3:32:00 PM

How sweet that Heart-Shaped Halo...I love how you did this poem. using short three line verses...Aww.lovely.

Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 4:50:00 PM

Thank you again my sweet friend. Always you leave a smile behind for me to find when you visit my poetry. :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/24/2017 5:56:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. So gentle and quiet. The voice and tone are so appealing to the eye and ear. (yes both) Your formatting and layout are marvelous and your words are beautiful. Here is a toast to Jupiter Findings. Well done completely. Have a wonderful morning.

Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 8:39:00 AM

Good morning Lisa. Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2017 10:08:00 AM

Touching words, Chris:)

Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thank you so very much Jo.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/23/2017 1:34:00 AM

Love this reflection of a poem :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thanks so very much Debbie. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/22/2017 9:29:00 AM

This poem is like a dream afloat with the moon, the tides, and an old boat still seeking like a bottle dropped in the sea with its message locked inside:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne Marie. I appreciate your visit and kind words about my poem.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/22/2017 7:43:00 AM

I enjoyed your imagery, Chris, nicely done.

Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Agnes

Darren White

Date: 4/22/2017 12:11:00 AM

I see a painting here, Chris, sitting on the remains of a wreck, love it, especially those crimson scarves, can see them :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thanks so much Darren. It was actually written to a photograph a friend sent me.