Jupiter

Let the fruits be fruits and 
Let Jupiter  be my symbolism

No place to rest, but once I witness a glimpse of your moons
The hurricane within softens

Was the Sun too hot for you?
Stepping farther and farther away
Had it been me
Id have turned to dust

A faint ring surrounds 
Promising something later?
For now, Farewell
Until we meet again, 
Perhaps in 12 or so years
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Alhemaidy Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 3:46 PM
Hello Malak Aljboor :-) Interesting read about the largest planet in our Sun set! Have a nice day ~ AA
Aljboor Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 6:15 AM
Thank you so much for your heartwarming comment!!
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