Jupiter

Jubilantly wedded gaseous alien consortium,
Unifying unconventionally vivacious forms and shapes;
Pouring out as though rays of diamond awesome,
Illuminating like the galaxy and lunarscapes;
Tremendously tantalizing as the very cosmos,
Elegantly embroidering the ether-space;
Rendering, thus, yeomen service to the Universe…  



15th May 2021
Planet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 1:24 PM
Excellent acrostic Christuraj, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Jones Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Congrats on a win
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 10:25 AM
I'm back to say congatulations on your win, Christuraj. This poem is certainly a beauty. :)
Sambourne Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 6:14 AM
An excellent write, Christuraj. You've captured the essence of Jupiter in 7 succinct lines. Congratulations! Brian
Caliri Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Congrats on your 7th place finish of my Planets contest from 6 months ago (sorry took so long, got life side-tracked). Keep up the great work!
Alex Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 11:12 PM
Thank you very much.
Jayasankar Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Beautiful acrostic... Well done Christuraj... God bless... ~ Ani
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Thank you very much.
Buehler Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:58 AM
A marvelous acrostic, which has the look of a winner. Good luck, Christuraj.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Excellent Acrostic, Dear Friend. Very nicely penned. BW ~ Mala
Neumann Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 1:45 AM
A stellar composure. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 2:02 AM
Thank you very much.
Burman Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Wow! A sure win....All the best for the contest.
Alex Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Thank You very much.
Fenn Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:30 PM
This is one cool acrostic Christuraj!
Alex Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 1:03 AM
Thank you very much.
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 3:59 PM
very well done!! I just put MY planet acrostic up too!
Alex Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 1:05 AM
Thank you very much.
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