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gin

Juniper

oh juniper tree
high five to thy lively gin
that drives us to jibe
a jitterbug jig and jive
that we all get berried in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Fabulous John. The humor is contagious. Congratulations! :)
Anderson Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers
Miller Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 7:29 AM
This is fun, congratulations
Anderson Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Thanks for the feedback. All the best
Empress Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 5:42 AM
This has a very lyrical touch to it and i love the alliterations the soulful nature of your word weaving! So lively! Pleasure reading! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light
Anderson Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 11:03 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments and feed back so very much. Cheers!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 10:32 AM
LOL! Congrats!
Anderson Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 12:00 PM
WOW! Thanks!
Healey Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 8:09 AM
This is a fun read! Congrats, John. Well done.
Anderson Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Yeah, thanks a lot, all the best
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 1:12 PM
though tanka do not typically have the meter of a fun rhyming poem, I really enjoy doing them that way myself sometimes. I really love the word play in the last line. Great job in my contest. Congrats
Anderson Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 1:31 PM
Yeah, thanks heaps. I enjoyed making it. Cheers
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