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Jeez - how much mess can a jovial toddler make! Jello is smeared on his jubilant face, and grape juice drips from the highchair! Just like his daddy, his jaded granny recalls! Checked with how many syllables J Pleiades Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman 03~04~17

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Date: 3/10/2017 4:01:00 PM
This is pure happiness! Wonderful Pleiades, a joy to read! Congratulations on the win, so creatively fun :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:21:00 PM
Coming back with congrats, Jan.
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Date: 3/8/2017 9:14:00 AM
A joyful read indeed! Congrats Jan!!
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Date: 3/8/2017 6:48:00 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:20:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 11:14:00 PM
So sweet Jan, congratulations :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:46:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations Jan!! Well done Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/7/2017 7:55:00 PM
Awesome, Jan, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2017 6:02:00 PM
Back to give you a Congrats on your win, Jan :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/7/2017 5:21:00 PM
Love the picture this paints, Jan! Great write! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/7/2017 5:25:00 PM
Many thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/6/2017 3:50:00 PM
this is FANTASTIC, Jan. one of the best I have seen. Wonderful!
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Date: 3/6/2017 6:04:00 PM
aww Thanks Andrea I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/6/2017 2:51:00 PM
What a fun poem, Jan! You wrote this one very well..good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 3/6/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Laura I found it quite a challenge with the J letter I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2017 10:51:00 AM
this is soo lovable, jan... you portrayed shabby chic through a child's world.. huggs
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Date: 3/5/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2017 9:14:00 AM
This is so much fun. What a Jem!
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Richard!:-) I struggled with the ending and wrote and re wrote it many times - Tim was a great help and I finally got the poem to the state where i was happy to post it:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/5/2017 8:39:00 AM
Excellent Pleiades Jan, such a difficult letter but you have made it look so easy, so clever, good luck though not needed, Roy.
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:51:00 AM
The first five lines flowed really well but the final 2 lines were re written many times before I posted it and Tim was great at helping me but now I am happy with the overall poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2017 5:25:00 AM
I love it, Jan! Excellent content, jovial and smooth flowing. Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/5/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thanks Paul I found it quite a challenge to write ... the first 5 lines came easily but I wrote and re wrote the ending until I was happy with the final poem:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2017 4:39:00 AM
So cute...Brilliant ending Jan... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:12:00 AM
Thanks Supraja I re wrote the ending several times before I was happy to post the poem:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2017 3:59:00 AM
- A cute pleiades, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:11:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/4/2017 9:35:00 PM
Ahhh, how sweet! Can I cybersqueeze those chubby cheeks? What a cutie...mess and all. I don't think boys ever out grow the messiness. I have a 47 year old husband, a nine year old son and a three year old son, all equally messy and equally sweet...thanks for sharing. Jan...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:02:00 AM
Your comment made me smile Rhonda. The first five lines flowed beautifully but I struggled with the ending and after numerous re-writes I am finally happy with the end result:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/4/2017 9:08:00 PM
SO appealing and SO smooth, Jan--a 7+! Janice
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Date: 3/5/2017 4:11:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I re-wrote the last 2 lines many times before I was happy with the poem:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/4/2017 8:38:00 PM
Love your very cute poem about junior Jan! G/L in the contest!~hugs Che xx
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Date: 3/5/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/4/2017 6:35:00 PM
Nicely done, Jan. Love the ending :) Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/4/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thanks Agnes:-) the first five lines were easy and I had to re write the ending before I posted it as it wasn't quite right - I'm now happy with the final version:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/4/2017 6:09:00 PM
Very cute poem and picture. Very nicely done.
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Date: 3/4/2017 6:18:00 PM
Thanks Robert I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/4/2017 5:19:00 PM
Very beautiful my granddaughter has kept me up all last night I'm shattered I know where your coming from x
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Date: 3/4/2017 5:59:00 PM
Aww Wendy I am sure her parents appreciate you looking after her... I don't have any grandchildren yet - I hope I do one day as I love little kiddies so much:-) hugs Jan xx
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