Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Junior

Jeez - how much mess can a
jovial toddler make!
Jello is smeared on his
jubilant face, and grape
juice drips from the highchair!
Just like his daddy, his
jaded granny recalls!



Checked with how many syllables
J Pleiades Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman

03~04~17

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Lynn Marie March 10, 2017 at 4:01 PM This is pure happiness! Wonderful Pleiades, a joy to read! Congratulations on the win, so creatively fun :-) blessings, lynn

Agnes Krampe March 8, 2017 at 2:21 PM Coming back with congrats, Jan.

Sushma A. Singh March 8, 2017 at 9:14 AM A joyful read indeed! Congrats Jan!!

Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:48 AM Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:20 AM - Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White March 7, 2017 at 11:14 PM So sweet Jan, congratulations :)

Joseph May March 7, 2017 at 8:46 PM Dropping back with my congrats

Deborah Burch March 7, 2017 at 8:39 PM Congratulations Jan!! Well done Big Hugggs deb

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:55 PM Awesome, Jan, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 6:02 PM Back to give you a Congrats on your win, Jan :) Jan Allison March 7, 2017 at 6:05 PM Thanks Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 5:21 PM Love the picture this paints, Jan! Great write! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim Jan Allison March 7, 2017 at 5:25 PM Many thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2017 at 3:50 PM this is FANTASTIC, Jan. one of the best I have seen. Wonderful! Jan Allison March 6, 2017 at 6:04 PM aww Thanks Andrea I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser March 6, 2017 at 2:51 PM What a fun poem, Jan! You wrote this one very well..good luck in the contest :) Jan Allison March 6, 2017 at 2:53 PM Thanks Laura I found it quite a challenge with the J letter I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud March 5, 2017 at 10:51 AM this is soo lovable, jan... you portrayed shabby chic through a child's world.. huggs Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 11:31 AM Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux March 5, 2017 at 9:14 AM This is so much fun. What a Jem! Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 9:16 AM Thanks Richard!:-) I struggled with the ending and wrote and re wrote it many times - Tim was a great help and I finally got the poem to the state where i was happy to post it:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett March 5, 2017 at 8:39 AM Excellent Pleiades Jan, such a difficult letter but you have made it look so easy, so clever, good luck though not needed, Roy. Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 8:51 AM The first five lines flowed really well but the final 2 lines were re written many times before I posted it and Tim was great at helping me but now I am happy with the overall poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 5:25 AM I love it, Jan! Excellent content, jovial and smooth flowing. Hugs // paul Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 7:06 AM Thanks Paul I found it quite a challenge to write ... the first 5 lines came easily but I wrote and re wrote the ending until I was happy with the final poem:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan March 5, 2017 at 4:39 AM So cute...Brilliant ending Jan... Good luck in the contest... Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 5:12 AM Thanks Supraja I re wrote the ending several times before I was happy to post the poem:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 3:59 AM - A cute pleiades, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 5:11 AM Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 4, 2017 at 9:35 PM Ahhh, how sweet! Can I cybersqueeze those chubby cheeks? What a cutie...mess and all. I don't think boys ever out grow the messiness. I have a 47 year old husband, a nine year old son and a three year old son, all equally messy and equally sweet...thanks for sharing. Jan...hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 5:02 AM Your comment made me smile Rhonda. The first five lines flowed beautifully but I struggled with the ending and after numerous re-writes I am finally happy with the end result:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy March 4, 2017 at 9:08 PM SO appealing and SO smooth, Jan--a 7+! Janice Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 4:11 AM Thanks Janice, I re-wrote the last 2 lines many times before I was happy with the poem:-) I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman March 4, 2017 at 8:38 PM Love your very cute poem about junior Jan! G/L in the contest!~hugs Che xx Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 4:09 AM Thanks Cheryl:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe March 4, 2017 at 6:35 PM Nicely done, Jan. Love the ending :) Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison March 4, 2017 at 6:39 PM Thanks Agnes:-) the first five lines were easy and I had to re write the ending before I posted it as it wasn't quite right - I'm now happy with the final version:-) hugs Jan xx

Running Wolves March 4, 2017 at 6:09 PM Very cute poem and picture. Very nicely done. Jan Allison March 4, 2017 at 6:18 PM Thanks Robert I hope Kim likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft March 4, 2017 at 5:19 PM Very beautiful my granddaughter has kept me up all last night I'm shattered I know where your coming from x Jan Allison March 4, 2017 at 5:59 PM Aww Wendy I am sure her parents appreciate you looking after her... I don't have any grandchildren yet - I hope I do one day as I love little kiddies so much:-) hugs Jan xx

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