Jungle

I went on a trip with my uncle it was through a jungle. We saw many colorful flowers, until the heavy rain showers. The birds then came out singing, off in the distance we heard bells ringing. Look there must be a hundred frogs, they are chasing the four dogs. This jungle is way too hot, it sure is no Camelot. We need a cold drink, I wish I had lemonade that is pink. Glad today is over, we need a hot shower and a soft bed cover. Date Written: 3/6/2023 "2 Place"

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:03:00 PM

Paula, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2023 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my fun jungle story/write. Have a great day writing away.........

Len Gasun

Date: 3/11/2023 1:30:00 AM

You've written a very beautiful and delightful poem with J theme my dear friend Paula. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Have a great weekend! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2023 6:00:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this fun jungle story/write. Hugs... Have a great day writing away.........

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/9/2023 7:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest win with this wonderful poem, Paula. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2023 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my jungle write. Have a great day writing away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2023 10:18:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations ... well deserved, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2023 5:54:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back again. Thanks... Hugs. Have a great day writing away.........

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/7/2023 11:42:00 AM

Hello Paula, I enjoyed this poem. It looks like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck. Glad you enjoyed reading this fun jungle write. Hugs. Have a great day writing away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2023 7:32:00 AM

- A tiring long day in the jungle ... enjoy reading, Paula ... take a well-deserved shower and rest- (I chose the journey:) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 9:27:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun write. Yes, now for a hot shower/rest. It has been a long day in the jungle. Hahahah... Hugs. Have a great day writing away.........