Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

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Jungfraujoch

Climbing slowly ascends a silent invitation to witness heaven on earth
Emerging in layers of allure, a rising pictorial lifts emotional grandeur
Bringing closer and closer dome of sky, tempting to reach and touch
Glistening frozen peaks with pinkish sunshine attempting to converge

Splendor strolls tenderly to romantic overtures over crunching snow 
As satiated visions swing on icy air-streams, floating on Top of Europe

June 18, 2018
First Place: When line six is a perfect fix contest by Silent One
Placed 8th: Mid June 2018 premiere contest by Brian Strand
NOTE:
Jungfraujoch is a scenic attraction located in Switzerland at an elevation of 3,466 meters (11,371 ft) above sea level, highest elevation in Europe.

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Valsa George April 13, 2022 at 9:00 AM Beautiful image and an informative piece written in great elegance ! Haven't heard of such a place ! From the picture and from your description I assume that it is a wonderful cliff almost touching heavens ! In six lines you have unveiled a marvel of Nature !

Vladislav Raven October 29, 2018 at 9:37 AM Hi Vijay, two wins in different competitions with this well deserved jewel. The words paint your imagery with such wondrous joy. Your words sing and this piece is deserving of being a fave my friend. Your golden pen does sing in wonder. A fave. have a wonderful monday. Your friend always....Mike.

M. L. Kiser September 1, 2018 at 2:45 PM A very well done piece; I can envision it and feel the chill; but, I'd rather see it from a warm hotel room.

Paul Callus June 24, 2018 at 4:45 PM A most striking poem supported by an equally striking picture, Vijay. You tempt the reader to visit and experience the beauty of this place. Congrats on your win. // paul Vijay Pandit June 25, 2018 at 4:47 PM Thank you Paul.

Eve Roper June 23, 2018 at 9:17 PM Congratulations on your great win, Vijay, beautiful verse and imagery , the pictures is a wow :) ... Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit June 24, 2018 at 7:19 AM Thank you Eve.

Susan Gentry June 22, 2018 at 5:29 PM Back again! Congratulations. Vijay Pandit June 24, 2018 at 7:19 AM Thank you Susan.

Susan Gentry June 22, 2018 at 5:05 PM Congratulations on your win with this informative and well-written poem. Great imagery. Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 5:29 PM Thank you Susan.

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2018 at 7:42 PM I see it's a winner. BIG congratulations. Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 6:30 AM Thanks Andrea.

Line Gauthier June 21, 2018 at 7:19 AM Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Vijay Pandit June 21, 2018 at 8:05 AM Thank you Line.

Heidi Sands June 21, 2018 at 6:19 AM Congratulations for your beautiful win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit June 21, 2018 at 6:23 AM Thank you Heidi.

Susan Ashley June 20, 2018 at 7:54 PM A poem of enchanting and spellbinding beauty and captivation so exquisitely expressed, Vijay. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan Vijay Pandit June 21, 2018 at 6:22 AM Thank you Susan for your visit and kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2018 at 7:00 PM - An excellent poem on 6 lines, Vijay :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: ) Vijay Pandit June 21, 2018 at 6:22 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. You are right, the entries were all great..I know I enjoyed reading your poem.

Connie Marcum Wong June 20, 2018 at 5:12 PM Wow Vijay! This poem is sensational! It deserves your first placement win! Congratulations! Beautiful! : ) Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 5:39 PM Thank you Connie.

Janice Canerdy June 20, 2018 at 4:54 PM Excellent, Vijay. CONGRATS! Janice Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 5:39 PM Thank you Janice.

Silent One June 20, 2018 at 3:29 PM Great imagery Vijay...Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 4:37 PM Thank you Silent One.

Nette Onclaud June 20, 2018 at 2:03 PM Huge congrats on your fine win, vijay!..huggs Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 4:37 PM Thank you nette.

Heidi Sands June 20, 2018 at 12:13 PM Congratulations for your great win Vijay ! :) Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 4:35 PM Thank you Heidi.

Pandita Sietesantos June 20, 2018 at 12:00 PM Swinging back to extend BIG Congratulations to you on your win! Bravo! Hugs. Pandita Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 4:35 PM Thank you Pandita.

Mystic Rose Rose June 20, 2018 at 11:02 AM It look amazing, Wish I could witness it for myself Vijay, I am sure it must be breathtaking being at the very top. Thanks for sharing. gl in the contest Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 11:42 AM Thank you Pixie.

Mike Gentile June 20, 2018 at 7:43 AM Back to say Congratulations on your well deserved placement Vijay!!! Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 11:42 AM Thank you Mike.

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2018 at 5:48 PM gosh it is so lovely, Vijay. Yet another place I have never been and will surely never go!! Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 6:25 AM One day you may decide to change your mind, Andrea..leave the door open. Many thanks for your kind words.

Dale Gregory Cozart June 19, 2018 at 5:41 PM Your gorgeous poem goes perfectly with the image. Congrats. Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 6:24 AM Many thanks Dale..appreciate the visit and your kind feedback.

Pandita Sietesantos June 19, 2018 at 1:04 PM Oh, how I would love to experience the wonder of this magnificent place! Your beautiful poem brings it to life with all its alluring splendor! It's already a winner - best of luck in the contest! hugs. Pandita Vijay Pandit June 19, 2018 at 4:01 PM Thank you Pandita. Yes, it is a breathtaking scenery up there. Hope you get a chance to go there. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

Nette Onclaud June 19, 2018 at 11:55 AM what a towering, scenic art from your dripping pen... i might have seen this if it were near mt.tetlis, switzerland, vijay... huggs Vijay Pandit June 19, 2018 at 3:57 PM You might have indeed! Mt. Titlis is near Lucerne, but not that far from Interlaken which is where you board a train to go up to Jungfrojoch. Many thanks for the kind feedback, nette.

Mike Gentile June 19, 2018 at 10:06 AM A breathtaking portrait you have painted with fabulous imagery, Vijay!! Vijay Pandit June 19, 2018 at 3:50 PM Thank you Mike ..appreciate the kind feedback.

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