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Jungfraujoch

Climbing slowly ascends a silent invitation to witness heaven on earth
Emerging in layers of allure, a rising pictorial lifts emotional grandeur
Bringing closer and closer dome of sky, tempting to reach and touch
Glistening frozen peaks with pinkish sunshine attempting to converge

Splendor strolls tenderly to romantic overtures over crunching snow 
As satiated visions swing on icy air-streams, floating on Top of Europe

June 18, 2018
First Place: When line six is a perfect fix contest by Silent One
Placed 8th: Mid June 2018 premiere contest by Brian Strand
NOTE:
Jungfraujoch is a scenic attraction located in Switzerland at an elevation of 3,466 meters (11,371 ft) above sea level, highest elevation in Europe.

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Valsa George Date: 4/13/2022 9:00:00 AM Beautiful image and an informative piece written in great elegance ! Haven't heard of such a place ! From the picture and from your description I assume that it is a wonderful cliff almost touching heavens ! In six lines you have unveiled a marvel of Nature ! Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/29/2018 9:37:00 AM Hi Vijay, two wins in different competitions with this well deserved jewel. The words paint your imagery with such wondrous joy. Your words sing and this piece is deserving of being a fave my friend. Your golden pen does sing in wonder. A fave. have a wonderful monday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 9/1/2018 2:45:00 PM A very well done piece; I can envision it and feel the chill; but, I'd rather see it from a warm hotel room. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/24/2018 4:45:00 PM A most striking poem supported by an equally striking picture, Vijay. You tempt the reader to visit and experience the beauty of this place. Congrats on your win. // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/25/2018 4:47:00 PM Thank you Paul.

Eve Roper Date: 6/23/2018 9:17:00 PM Congratulations on your great win, Vijay, beautiful verse and imagery , the pictures is a wow :) ... Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/24/2018 7:19:00 AM Thank you Eve.

Susan Gentry Date: 6/22/2018 5:29:00 PM Back again! Congratulations. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/24/2018 7:19:00 AM Thank you Susan.

Susan Gentry Date: 6/22/2018 5:05:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this informative and well-written poem. Great imagery. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/22/2018 5:29:00 PM Thank you Susan.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/21/2018 7:42:00 PM I see it's a winner. BIG congratulations. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/22/2018 6:30:00 AM Thanks Andrea.

Line Gauthier Date: 6/21/2018 7:19:00 AM Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/21/2018 8:05:00 AM Thank you Line.

Heidi Sands Date: 6/21/2018 6:19:00 AM Congratulations for your beautiful win Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/21/2018 6:23:00 AM Thank you Heidi.

Susan Ashley Date: 6/20/2018 7:54:00 PM A poem of enchanting and spellbinding beauty and captivation so exquisitely expressed, Vijay. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/21/2018 6:22:00 AM Thank you Susan for your visit and kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/20/2018 7:00:00 PM - An excellent poem on 6 lines, Vijay :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: ) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/21/2018 6:22:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. You are right, the entries were all great..I know I enjoyed reading your poem.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/20/2018 5:12:00 PM Wow Vijay! This poem is sensational! It deserves your first placement win! Congratulations! Beautiful! : ) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 5:39:00 PM Thank you Connie.

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/20/2018 4:54:00 PM Excellent, Vijay. CONGRATS! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 5:39:00 PM Thank you Janice.

Silent One Date: 6/20/2018 3:29:00 PM Great imagery Vijay...Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 4:37:00 PM Thank you Silent One.

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/20/2018 2:03:00 PM Huge congrats on your fine win, vijay!..huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 4:37:00 PM Thank you nette.

Heidi Sands Date: 6/20/2018 12:13:00 PM Congratulations for your great win Vijay ! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 4:35:00 PM Thank you Heidi.

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/20/2018 12:00:00 PM Swinging back to extend BIG Congratulations to you on your win! Bravo! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 4:35:00 PM Thank you Pandita.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/20/2018 11:02:00 AM It look amazing, Wish I could witness it for myself Vijay, I am sure it must be breathtaking being at the very top. Thanks for sharing. gl in the contest Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 11:42:00 AM Thank you Pixie.

Mike Gentile Date: 6/20/2018 7:43:00 AM Back to say Congratulations on your well deserved placement Vijay!!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 11:42:00 AM Thank you Mike.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/19/2018 5:48:00 PM gosh it is so lovely, Vijay. Yet another place I have never been and will surely never go!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 6:25:00 AM One day you may decide to change your mind, Andrea..leave the door open. Many thanks for your kind words.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 6/19/2018 5:41:00 PM Your gorgeous poem goes perfectly with the image. Congrats. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/20/2018 6:24:00 AM Many thanks Dale..appreciate the visit and your kind feedback.

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/19/2018 1:04:00 PM Oh, how I would love to experience the wonder of this magnificent place! Your beautiful poem brings it to life with all its alluring splendor! It's already a winner - best of luck in the contest! hugs. Pandita Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/19/2018 4:01:00 PM Thank you Pandita. Yes, it is a breathtaking scenery up there. Hope you get a chance to go there. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/19/2018 11:55:00 AM what a towering, scenic art from your dripping pen... i might have seen this if it were near mt.tetlis, switzerland, vijay... huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/19/2018 3:57:00 PM You might have indeed! Mt. Titlis is near Lucerne, but not that far from Interlaken which is where you board a train to go up to Jungfrojoch. Many thanks for the kind feedback, nette.

Mike Gentile Date: 6/19/2018 10:06:00 AM A breathtaking portrait you have painted with fabulous imagery, Vijay!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/19/2018 3:50:00 PM Thank you Mike ..appreciate the kind feedback.

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