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Climbing slowly ascends a silent invitation to witness heaven on earth Emerging in layers of allure, a rising pictorial lifts emotional grandeur Bringing closer and closer dome of sky, tempting to reach and touch Glistening frozen peaks with pinkish sunshine attempting to converge Splendor strolls tenderly to romantic overtures over crunching snow As satiated visions swing on icy air-streams, floating on Top of Europe June 18, 2018 First Place: When line six is a perfect fix contest by Silent One Placed 8th: Mid June 2018 premiere contest by Brian Strand NOTE: Jungfraujoch is a scenic attraction located in Switzerland at an elevation of 3,466 meters (11,371 ft) above sea level, highest elevation in Europe.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/13/2022 9:00:00 AM

Beautiful image and an informative piece written in great elegance ! Haven't heard of such a place ! From the picture and from your description I assume that it is a wonderful cliff almost touching heavens ! In six lines you have unveiled a marvel of Nature !

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/29/2018 9:37:00 AM

Hi Vijay, two wins in different competitions with this well deserved jewel. The words paint your imagery with such wondrous joy. Your words sing and this piece is deserving of being a fave my friend. Your golden pen does sing in wonder. A fave. have a wonderful monday. Your friend always....Mike.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/1/2018 2:45:00 PM

A very well done piece; I can envision it and feel the chill; but, I'd rather see it from a warm hotel room.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/24/2018 4:45:00 PM

A most striking poem supported by an equally striking picture, Vijay. You tempt the reader to visit and experience the beauty of this place. Congrats on your win. // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/25/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/23/2018 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Vijay, beautiful verse and imagery , the pictures is a wow :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/24/2018 7:19:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/22/2018 5:29:00 PM

Back again! Congratulations.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/24/2018 7:19:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/22/2018 5:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this informative and well-written poem. Great imagery.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/22/2018 5:29:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2018 7:42:00 PM

I see it's a winner. BIG congratulations.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/22/2018 6:30:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2018 7:19:00 AM

Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/21/2018 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/21/2018 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations for your beautiful win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/21/2018 6:23:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/20/2018 7:54:00 PM

A poem of enchanting and spellbinding beauty and captivation so exquisitely expressed, Vijay. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/21/2018 6:22:00 AM

Thank you Susan for your visit and kind feedback.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2018 7:00:00 PM

- An excellent poem on 6 lines, Vijay :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/21/2018 6:22:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. You are right, the entries were all great..I know I enjoyed reading your poem.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2018 5:12:00 PM

Wow Vijay! This poem is sensational! It deserves your first placement win! Congratulations! Beautiful! : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Connie.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/20/2018 4:54:00 PM

Excellent, Vijay. CONGRATS! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Janice.

Silent One

Date: 6/20/2018 3:29:00 PM

Great imagery Vijay...Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you Silent One.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2018 2:03:00 PM

Huge congrats on your fine win, vijay!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you nette.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/20/2018 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations for your great win Vijay ! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/20/2018 12:00:00 PM

Swinging back to extend BIG Congratulations to you on your win! Bravo! Hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Pandita.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/20/2018 11:02:00 AM

It look amazing, Wish I could witness it for myself Vijay, I am sure it must be breathtaking being at the very top. Thanks for sharing. gl in the contest

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Pixie.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/20/2018 7:43:00 AM

Back to say Congratulations on your well deserved placement Vijay!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Mike.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2018 5:48:00 PM

gosh it is so lovely, Vijay. Yet another place I have never been and will surely never go!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 6:25:00 AM

One day you may decide to change your mind, Andrea..leave the door open. Many thanks for your kind words.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/19/2018 5:41:00 PM

Your gorgeous poem goes perfectly with the image. Congrats.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2018 6:24:00 AM

Many thanks Dale..appreciate the visit and your kind feedback.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2018 1:04:00 PM

Oh, how I would love to experience the wonder of this magnificent place! Your beautiful poem brings it to life with all its alluring splendor! It's already a winner - best of luck in the contest! hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2018 4:01:00 PM

Thank you Pandita. Yes, it is a breathtaking scenery up there. Hope you get a chance to go there. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/19/2018 11:55:00 AM

what a towering, scenic art from your dripping pen... i might have seen this if it were near mt.tetlis, switzerland, vijay... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2018 3:57:00 PM

You might have indeed! Mt. Titlis is near Lucerne, but not that far from Interlaken which is where you board a train to go up to Jungfrojoch. Many thanks for the kind feedback, nette.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/19/2018 10:06:00 AM

A breathtaking portrait you have painted with fabulous imagery, Vijay!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2018 3:50:00 PM

Thank you Mike ..appreciate the kind feedback.