Juneberries

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Placed Second in: High Fives For June Typo Edit Poetry Contest of Andrea Dietrich

(Checked by Syllables Counter: howmanysyllables.com) Juneberries sweetish juneberries grow where wildness softly weaves awake summer scents, hidden treasure amidst leaves wholesome bounty of nature.

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Ink Empress

Date: 6/26/2025 8:53:00 AM

How beautiful and descriptive! The picture youv used for your tanka is absolutely gorgeous too! Pleasure reading this stunning take on the prompt! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/27/2025 12:31:00 AM

Thank you dear poetess for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes. These have raised my spirits up. Wishing you a blessed day.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2025 1:36:00 PM

I love line 2-3. Great imagery. Congrats in my contest

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/25/2025 11:37:00 AM

Thank you poetess for appreciating the above tanks and for its placement in the contest sponsored by you. Wishing you a delightful day.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/15/2025 11:42:00 AM

Hello Guptar, Are the June berries just for the birds to eat? Or do people eat them to? If so what do they taste like. blessings mu friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2025 12:11:00 PM

Hello Guptar, I would eat those berries. they sound to me to be delicious. If i see them in the grocery store , i would buy them. My friend. /Blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/17/2025 12:01:00 PM

Thank you my friend for visiting my page. In fact, juneberries known by different names across North America, are sweet when ripe. They can be eaten fresh or in bakeries. This fruit, rather small in size, is wholesome, an excellent source of "iron, vitamins A and E and high levels of protein, magnesium, calcium, potassium, and antioxidants " according to a reliable source. ...

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/17/2025 12:01:00 PM

Wishing you a cheerful day.

Valsa George

Date: 6/14/2025 5:43:00 AM

Beautiful tanka. "hidden treasure amidst leaves". Love that line These berries are so small that they are not easily visible, except when ripe . .All the Best dear Krish

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/14/2025 8:56:00 AM

Thanks a lot Valsa for appreciating the write and your kind wishes. The berries are also a boon for health. I, frequently take them as part of diabetes diet. Wishing you a cheerful weekend.